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for What if?

by aclassicpirate2

person daygonna
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how sad! i felt tears creep up. i felt so sad for her. i hope u make them make up, erik was so insensitive towards her. i really hope ull update soon
person daygonna
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz, plz, update soon. erik was so horrible. plz dont keep us waiting to see more
person Angela
schedule January 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lovely begining. Please continue.
person Cheryl
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it would kind of lessen the power of the story. It would defeat and undermine his character, as well as change the things that we love most about him. But don't ever change what you want to write because of other people. You should write strickly from your immigination and from desire to write, not for what people think of you. Always write what you want to, even if people don't like it, as long as you like it, who cares what other people think.
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this idea is a true masterpeice my life depends on your writing it if you dont i feel i shall die inside and crawl up into a little ball and shed tears for eternity please write it maybe we could write it together sexually. The thought arouses me I LOVE YOU please be my best freind email me with more story ideas for our co writing plans please R+R MY WORK so you can tell moi what you think

louv ya lots

RAOULSTHONG
person Pamina
schedule January 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Firstly, his name is spelled with a "k," not a "c." Secondly, I don't know about the idea. That sounds to me like a Mary-Sue, which I'm generally not fond of. I like the E/C pair. It just wouldn't be as interesting if Erik never fell in love with Christine; none of the same events would take place, and the plot would be completely different. Please, write whatever you feel like, but I don't know if I'd read it.
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