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Ahh! I was reading this story, pressing the next chapter button since chapter one, and all of a sudden, there was no more next chapter button! Chapter seven was sweet. It's about time that they got together, and in the music room, no less. I hope that Raoul doesn't cause trouble for them, but I know that he will. Writing evil, trouble causing stuff is too much fun to pass up, I know. Update soon!!

Yea they forgive each other! Ahh Raoul! Update soon please!

Whoa. At least that's out. Update soon please!

Wow, this is really good! It sounds like something similiar to another story I've read but it's different enough to be good. Update soon, i wanna read what happens!

Aww! that was a cute scene! Update soon please!

hHmm, as much as I love your story, I'm wondering if chapter 5 is just a tad quick and OOC regarding Christine. I do think Erik would be very tempted to take advantage of her in such a compromising situation, however, given that Christine was on the verge of death and drugged, I don't think she would be in the 'mood' for sex. Also it would have been more touching if they had waited until she came to him of free will before they had sex as Erik wanted. Otherwise, I do like where this story seems to be going, and think that making Erik angry at her for the past months is very in character for him (he is a moody little bugger ^_^). Please don't take this as a flame, I love this story and please, write more. This chapter did come off as a bit rushed, and OOC. I am looking forward to seeing how they deal with their little problem with Raoul, and will love reading Eriks feelings on the predicament. ^_^ Keep up the good work, but try to keep the characters in character. ^_^Ending on a happy note, your writing is lovely and your story is more creative than most. This is one of my favorite E/C stories.

Your humble reviewer,

M.M. =^._.^=

Well, I'm glad that my criticism helps. I love where this is going! You must continue soon or else I shan't know what to do. There are still the few grammer errors, such as sentences that need to be punctuated and such, but aside from that not much else. Your writing gives good detail and explaination to the characters and their behaviour. Honestly, as often as Raoul is played out of character,this is the role I can most likely see him being. Under such stress from the memories of Erik and the love he and Christine shared; that is a huge undertaking, one that can destroy.

Brava, Brava, Bravisima! Continue soon, please! I long for more.

Much Love
Angel Marie

Ok, hi again. Yea, I just reread what my first original post was, and yea, hehe, I really should reread those things more often. Dear God, I appear to be a schizophrenic in my last reply compared to my first. Yea, I still stand on my "All-Hate-Raoul" thing and that he is out of character, but now that you have built up the storyline better, I am finding that his actions fit in better with the reasons and such. He simply is just too insecure and jealous of anyone and everything that Ms. Daae sees, touches or is surrounded by; that boy needs therapy (or to jump off a bridge. either are pretty good). tehe. But, I still stand on what I have said, no matter the difference in opinions in either posts; no matter the confliction in my opinion, I would not have wasted the time and energy to say it. So, take my advice, and reread any posts you made prior to posting again! LoL.

Keep up your writing!

Much Love
Angel Marie

Would anybody other than Erik (for the sole purpose of stealing his fun) object to me killing Raoul myself?
I would sincerely enjoy the slow and torturous act! How DARE he do that to her!
Hope Erik gives the little *beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep* what he deserves!

Can't wait for the next chapter!
I don't think I ever can!

Mwah, Luv Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx

Thank God she's not dead! Damn Raoul! Look at what your stupid temper did to her! Update soon please!!!!