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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I hope you are going to continue. This is a really good story and I like the fact that they didn't just jump into bed immediately. I do think, however, that Erik might give her the baby she wants! Wouldn't that just put a burr in Raouls butt.
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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
are you ever going to update?...lol..I love this story, I hope you do continue it...
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great!!!!!!Please update soon!
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story,love all the angst.Can't wait for an update. Hope Christine and Erik eventually get together, if you know what I mean? Chuckle, chuckle. Thanks for writing such a wonderful story. Diane
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! But where the heck are you?
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July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I really, really like. It never fails to amaze me when someone can write a fan fic on Adult Fan Fiction that has a plot of all things and holds out on sex for seven entire chapters, maybe more.
Your writing is exquisite and your word choice is very good for this sort of fic.
I especially love how you kept Erik's personality. In many fics he turns into this simpering, disgusting lovething with Christine, but you retained his cynicism and jaded-ness, if you get what I'm saying. And I like the turn in Christine, her newfound hardness. I always thought she was sort of stubborn, but everyone makes her out to be the Christine from the beginning of Webber's movie, with that stupid, adoringly stunned look plastered on her face for her whole life. I like that she has depth in this, because the Phantom's excess of depth still would not be enough for the two of them.
Maybe, when you have time, rework the part with the piano/music store owner. Put something in there about his and Erik's relationship, even though it doesn't really matter. Else, why would the Phantom go with Christine, at the urging of this weird pianostore man? It needs something, just a suggestion.
And, please, for God's sake, put another few chapters up. I'm on edge.
Your writing is exquisite and your word choice is very good for this sort of fic.
I especially love how you kept Erik's personality. In many fics he turns into this simpering, disgusting lovething with Christine, but you retained his cynicism and jaded-ness, if you get what I'm saying. And I like the turn in Christine, her newfound hardness. I always thought she was sort of stubborn, but everyone makes her out to be the Christine from the beginning of Webber's movie, with that stupid, adoringly stunned look plastered on her face for her whole life. I like that she has depth in this, because the Phantom's excess of depth still would not be enough for the two of them.
Maybe, when you have time, rework the part with the piano/music store owner. Put something in there about his and Erik's relationship, even though it doesn't really matter. Else, why would the Phantom go with Christine, at the urging of this weird pianostore man? It needs something, just a suggestion.
And, please, for God's sake, put another few chapters up. I'm on edge.
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this so much, please please please update soon!
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've fallen in love with this story. Please update soon! It's been too long since there was a new chapter :'( *sniffle*
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am absolutely loving this....please update soon!
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I enjoy the story much more when it is in third person. But I love it.....please update soon!