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LOL!! What a hilarious line to end a chapter with!!! ::snicker:: Why, indeed. I am SO looking forward to more!!

Yea update! This should be good. Update soon please!

write more sooooonn!!!!! love how Christine came back to Eriks hometown, funny "I was here first" attitude! ^_^ please write more, this story is addicting. ^_^

Really great start. Love EC fics and I think this is a fresh change. I look forward to reading more.

Hey, great story. I love the different approach u took into finding a way for them to meet up. I also like that you kept Erik's anger but still remembered that he desperately loves Christine so he can't always be mean to her. I get sad when authors make him purely hateful. Anywayz, great story. Update soon, i wanna know what happens!
Oh, and the POV thing, i liked 3rd person more, but hey, im flexible, and as long as you keep up the good writing, i don't mind the POV-experimentation.
Good Job ~ Jen

Very good plot, I do enjoy the way you write the characters, and appreciate the way you stay true to Raoul's character and still manage to create problems in the marriage, very good (while I hate the fop myself, he is a dolt, not evil). Only a little critique is that the spelling and verb tenses switch at some spots and can be a bit distracting, nothing a beta couldn't fix, and I personally prefered the omnicient pov rather than the first person, but both were good. ^^ keep writing more, I am eager to see how this turns out, very original and interesting! If you need a beta ever, drop me a line.

This is wonderful. It is unlike any I've read so far, and you write extremely well. I'm looking forward to seeing what you have planned next. Great job. :)

I love your story! Absolutely LOVE it!

Do hurry with the next chapters!

Mwah! Love Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx

I really like this...it has a unique air to it which is quite enchanting. Very well done.

Wonderful story, no need to be afraid of flames here, for i do not see why you would recieve any. A comment here or there seems out of character, and i couldnt care less if you make Raoul out to be villian (tehe) but i love, LOVE LOVE LOVE, that you keep the dear Phantom in character and he doesnt j/ immeadiately become some domesticated man and instead keeps some of his (very yummy) gruffness, anger, and... passion **sighs dreamily**

Anywho, Keep up the great work update as soon as possible... oh how i do hate being left hanging (altho i love it too)

~~Jen