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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful. I enoy your writing style, it is smooth and flows really well. This was a great chapter. I'm looking forward to more.
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. Your writing has a refined air, which I like. Some grammatical errors; but nothing horrid. Please continue. :-)
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. I love that you deal with Raoul's family and their contempt for Christine. I can't wait to read more and see where this is going. Great job! :)
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February 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Raoul's such an asshole - I love that!! ^_^ No reasons for flames here anyway, hon, as it's a great style and screams for more chapters (and soon, please!)!! Go on!!!!