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March 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your style of writing. This last chapter...you bring these three characters into life. I could feel the sturggle, the underlying feelings as if i were present during the exchange in the garden. I look forward to the next chapters...please don't let it be long!
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So much updating while I was on vacation. Please keep updating on a regular basis. This fanfic is wonderful!
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, at first i was a wee bit confused with jumping around to different times. I dont mind the fluctuating timeline, in fact it makes for a very interesting and unique way of storytelling, however, if you could just do something to signify where one time/place ends and another begins, i think it would make your story much easier to read, u kno, just relieve some confusion. But, anywayz, i really enjoy your story and once i got a hang of what was going on, i love it even more. Keep it up.
Jen
Jen
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My goodness, I started reading and I couldn't stop. You MUST continue. It's amazingly written. Its very easy to slip into any one of the character's places and feel what they're feeling. again I say..amazing
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March 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
W o w. I love it! The dream is a really cool addition to an already awesome plot line. I like where this is going; you're showing Christine's view of this whole affair instead of an Eric v.p or Raoul. How is it that the heroine seems to be overlooked in all the fics? Well, good job on a more original idea! *Applauds* Keep this up and do update soon!
much love
angel marie
much love
angel marie
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo...GO Christine! That filthy mongrel! Touching my Erik!!! Grrrrrrr........etc!
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Mwah! Love Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Mwah! Love Skimbleshanks!
xxxMeowxxx
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful chapter! You tell this story in such an enchanting way, very different from a lot of the other fics in this section. I look forward to reading more from you.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... Poor Erik! I can't wait for the next chapter. I want to know how Erik came to be with the Gypsies again and.... well everything! So far a very well written, if painful for Erik, story! I look forward to more.
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admit that I actually was kinda confused during reading the first chapter. But then lightening kinda struck me (finally ^_^) and I absolutely love that story. It's so touching and full of tension at the same moment... And it's not that trashy "let's hurt Erik to make him suffer" thing cuz it seems so real. Amazing!! Can't wait for the next chapter... :)
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March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is a lovely story. It's written so much better than other fics out there.
Great job. I look forward to the next chapter.
Great job. I look forward to the next chapter.