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May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! You write wonderful sex scenes that are passionate, intense, and sensual all at once. All that said, I think that the scene could have been a little longer, as that would increase some of the tension and desire that was brewing between them. I also know, however, that their longing for one another is desperate and overwhelming, so it makes sense that their union be swift and frantic. Perhaps I am biased, as I tend to have a preference for long foreplay sequences. Overall, your writing flows wonderfully and your dialogue is lyrical and poetic. Great work
I am deeply sorry about your loss, best wishes to you and your family during this difficult time.
I am deeply sorry about your loss, best wishes to you and your family during this difficult time.
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May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The chapter was excellent, as always. You are a remarkable writer, and even more so that you can write under such adverse circumstances. I, too, have suffered a loss recently, and I applaud you for stepping back to your feet so quickly. God bless you and your family, and may your neice's soul rest in the hands of the gentle creator.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I wonder what will happen when she learns about the new Patron... and I forgot... do the managers know Erik is the Phantom?
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Once again, an amazing chapter. No danger of people not enjoying it, it was perfect.
Best wishes and deepest sympathy.
Best wishes and deepest sympathy.
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May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So far I have enjoyed reading the story. I am so sorry to hear of your loss :(
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a great story! i absolutely love it and cannot wait for it to continue! keep it up!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooh yippie :D :D sorry for the delay in response :( my mum sells :P
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
No way you just ended the chapter there! Dangit, that's just mean. Chapter 8 better show up quick!
Lol, on another note... I love your Erik!!! yay!!! And your writing is really great, especially the plots, so keep it coming!!!! (fast, i'm selfish :D)
Lol, on another note... I love your Erik!!! yay!!! And your writing is really great, especially the plots, so keep it coming!!!! (fast, i'm selfish :D)
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7
(Head in hands) NOOOOO!!!! You simply can't stop there!!!
The tension is so thick you could cut it with a knife! ARGGGH!
I must say, you sure know how to keep your readers on pins and needles! Please update soon!
Now after my tantrum, let me just say this was a beautifully written chapter. (Of course, you always do an exceptional job!).
I could feel every emotional nuance between Erik and Christine.
Very nice touch having him disapprove of her singing one moment and then being moved to tears the next. It was just the sort of reaction you would expect from Erik.
You have a way of writing the Phantom that is truly magical. Now, keep up the good work and update!
BRAVO!!!
(Head in hands) NOOOOO!!!! You simply can't stop there!!!
The tension is so thick you could cut it with a knife! ARGGGH!
I must say, you sure know how to keep your readers on pins and needles! Please update soon!
Now after my tantrum, let me just say this was a beautifully written chapter. (Of course, you always do an exceptional job!).
I could feel every emotional nuance between Erik and Christine.
Very nice touch having him disapprove of her singing one moment and then being moved to tears the next. It was just the sort of reaction you would expect from Erik.
You have a way of writing the Phantom that is truly magical. Now, keep up the good work and update!
BRAVO!!!
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this phic!
I look forward to each update with relish!
I look forward to each update with relish!