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for Black Angels

by Provocateur

person gv
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god you better update!
person opulence
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...absolutely wonderful. Please update often and soon!
person Cyranothe2nd
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, well, THAT was a surprise! Very nice story. Subtle sexuality, like the OC (informative without being annoying) and I really like the tension between the happy home life that Raoul and Christine have (the big feet thing was precious!) and the passion she feels for Erik. *sigh I have a horrible feeling this won't end well....
person Jen
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You certainly have a knack for description! So far your story is very good. I also love the movie for the yumminess that is Gerard Butler's phantom, and its nice to read a story that manages to stay true to the movie's storyline and incorporate parts of the book (like sorlie and the comte). Your storyline is very interesting, and i like the pacing and time changes. O yes, my favorite part was the decription of the baby, with the dropped hints added in future chapters about erik's blue-green eyes, and bronzed skin. tehe. "She would sit upon the top of his grand organ..." loved that line, it made me laugh...

bravo, Jen
person Provocateur
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey all,

I want to thank you all so much for your reviews, I really appreciate them. Yes, there will be continuous updates, this story is far from over. :)
person gv
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo man if you do not keep updating this i will cry until there is a flood in my room
person gv
schedule April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh please more!! this is getting so good
person The Phantom\'s Angel
schedule March 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! I love this story! So far it's got a great plot! Update soon please!
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