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for Black Angels

by Provocateur

person Skim
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I KNOW you're not going to leave us there are you? Great job!
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
And we are far luckier than Erik cuz we get to read that story!! Hopefully, that will not change. ;) I hope you won't let them suffer more than necessary, but whatever you do I'm sure it'll be as great as it's been so far! Great work, great style, great plot, great everything. Absolutely adorable!!! ^_^
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy Mary Mother of God! I started this story and before I knew it I was on chapter 18! If I may offer some input....be careful of using past and present tense in the same sentence, make sure you're not leaving words out of a sentence, and try rewording at times. But MY GOD! This is a fantastic story! You suck the reader right into the Phantom's world from the very beginning. You give all the character's such depth the reader is nothing but compelled to feel their emotions. Please keep up the wonderful work! you truly are a gifted writer and I anxiously await more!
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you're continuing this wonderful story, my friend. I am enjoying Christine's and Erik's revelations - perhaps she will gain the courage to be with the man she loves so that even Raoul may be out of torment....and perhaps in Meg's arms? Erik and Christine will hopefully be able to make peace with their respective friends and live their lives happily together. Wonderful story and wonderful addition as always. Brava :) PMEL Talia
person Tara
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When are you going to finish this story? It's really good and I want to know how it will end. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Glad to see that you are back. I expect now we will all go through a lot of E/C angst now...and I suspect that Erik forgot about his "french letters" with that last encounter. LOL!
person Tara
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the rest of this story to continue. As much as I love the movie, I really like the fanfictions also. I hope Erik and Christine stay together. I also love the way you have mentioned his wig! None of the other fanfictions do that.
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brava! A wonderful return, my friend. We've missed you. Fabulous story, I love Erik's "good-bye". I hope it's not near the end. They belong together - you've written them so well :)
person Chelsea
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I found one of my favorite passages in your story so far in chapter 24:
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She succumbed to him, and in doing so found a freedom she never thought possible.
The freedom to choose a lover. Not a mate, husband, companion, or friend, but a lover.
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That is stunning - I love it :) I was so pleased with the chapter's ending as well. Everyone knows you need a proper 'bon voyage' before going your seperate ways! Your work is beautiful and I admire you so much for that.. I can't wait to see the next chapter. Please don't keep us waiting too long! TWO THUMBS UP
person Koda
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't read the first part. :| Sorry. But. Greatgreatgreat.
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