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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. It is very well written, you are very talented.
Hope you update it soon!!
Hope you update it soon!!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as ever. Thank you for updating :)
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July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'M BACK!!!! :) Did you miss me? Sorry, life intruded for a bit.
Good news! Not only has the plank been retracted but I have a batch of chocolate chip cookies for your wonderful chappie! Not very pirate-like I know, but very appropriate! :) Now, on to more serious matters! I'm speachless, truly speachless at the depth of emotions your chapter brought out. It was incredible! FINALLY, the chapter I've been waiting for and it was not a disappointment in the least! I don't think anyone else could have described the releasing of Erik's invisible chains with any more feeling than you did. I found myself feeling elated that Erik and Christine have found each other. This chapter brought feelings of turmoil, angst, desire, happiness, peace and sadness out of me and jumbled them into a wonderful mix! Pass back one of those cookies, I'm in such turmoil I need some chocolate, savvy? You write the most deeply wonderful stories where the reader falls into the tale and feels like the characters are people they know and can really relate to in one form or another. The wording you use is in a simple word, unbelieveable! Descriptive, yet poetic and with a great deal of feeling! I could not make any recommendations to change a word without ruining such a beautiful piece so I will just say, "BRAVO!!!" Please update soon and remember my request for a HAPPY ending for our love birds! Ta!
Good news! Not only has the plank been retracted but I have a batch of chocolate chip cookies for your wonderful chappie! Not very pirate-like I know, but very appropriate! :) Now, on to more serious matters! I'm speachless, truly speachless at the depth of emotions your chapter brought out. It was incredible! FINALLY, the chapter I've been waiting for and it was not a disappointment in the least! I don't think anyone else could have described the releasing of Erik's invisible chains with any more feeling than you did. I found myself feeling elated that Erik and Christine have found each other. This chapter brought feelings of turmoil, angst, desire, happiness, peace and sadness out of me and jumbled them into a wonderful mix! Pass back one of those cookies, I'm in such turmoil I need some chocolate, savvy? You write the most deeply wonderful stories where the reader falls into the tale and feels like the characters are people they know and can really relate to in one form or another. The wording you use is in a simple word, unbelieveable! Descriptive, yet poetic and with a great deal of feeling! I could not make any recommendations to change a word without ruining such a beautiful piece so I will just say, "BRAVO!!!" Please update soon and remember my request for a HAPPY ending for our love birds! Ta!
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
what we've all been waiting for... BRAVO! well done :)
(well worth the wait might i add)
your language used to describe the whole scene with christine & erik was .. just perfect. you made the act of love-making all more the beautiful and poignant. i have no criticisms! i LOOOOVE this story.. keep it coming!
(well worth the wait might i add)
your language used to describe the whole scene with christine & erik was .. just perfect. you made the act of love-making all more the beautiful and poignant. i have no criticisms! i LOOOOVE this story.. keep it coming!
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July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story! Rich in language, beautifully detailed, and just enough steaminess, angst, romance, discord, etc. in all the right spots. I read the first 20 chapters in one night, and then waited on pins and needles for the next. Chapter 21 was well worth the wait!!! I nearly cried! BRAVA!!
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was *very* good. I love you, you know! Ahhh. I think I'll..go to bed..yeah. -disappears into bedroom, thoughts of Erik in mind-
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July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh...I am sitting here stunned....this chapter was so unbelievably wonderful, so magnificent...I can't even find all the right words to tell you...sigh...it was so fantastic, I am speechless!!!!!!!!!
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-grins- Christine's getting a bit needy, isn't she?
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hell YES! This can only go good places from here.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm? Which is better? The spanking Erik in 'Dance' or the Erik with the chains in this one? Decisions, decisions...LOL!