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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying this fic, and looking forward to further updates.
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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Tips hat to author) Nice job on the chapter. Mind you, it is not my favorite chapter because it does not have Erik in it :( but it was still good.
A break from all the steaminess is best once and awhile to keep the anticipation going. Just please don't make it a habit! :)
I like how Raoul and Philippe are truly trapped in their situation; however, please don't make Christine go all "wishy washy" for Raoul because of this!!! It is unfortunate he is in this predicament but I think Christine would be reflected as not having any backbone if she stays with Raoul as a result of this. Please, please let her end up with Erik! (Still pushing for them to be together!) :)
The discussion with Christine and Meg was great! I'm sorry to see their friendship so strained but it proves that Christine has deeper feelings for Erik and I also think Meg is beginning to reveal some hidden feelings for Raoul. Maybe? Hmmmm?
Nice work as always. Please update soon. It is so hard waiting for the next chapter!
BRAVO!!!!
A break from all the steaminess is best once and awhile to keep the anticipation going. Just please don't make it a habit! :)
I like how Raoul and Philippe are truly trapped in their situation; however, please don't make Christine go all "wishy washy" for Raoul because of this!!! It is unfortunate he is in this predicament but I think Christine would be reflected as not having any backbone if she stays with Raoul as a result of this. Please, please let her end up with Erik! (Still pushing for them to be together!) :)
The discussion with Christine and Meg was great! I'm sorry to see their friendship so strained but it proves that Christine has deeper feelings for Erik and I also think Meg is beginning to reveal some hidden feelings for Raoul. Maybe? Hmmmm?
Nice work as always. Please update soon. It is so hard waiting for the next chapter!
BRAVO!!!!
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::sigh:: a new chapter -- yay! your storyline is moving along perfectly.. not too fast, not too slow :) FINALLY christine has admitted to being madly in love with Erik. goodgod, it's about damn time!! the conversation between Meg and Christine was so real.. i could feel myself getting red in the cheeks and flustered at all the harsh words Meg spat at Christine.. which obviously means you're doing your job! KUDOS <3 can't wait til the next chapter.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good scene of conflict between Meg and Christine. I love reading this story.
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, an intense and emotionally suspenseful chapter -- it made me feel good that Christine's heart is finally softening to Erik's love for her. Meg's strong reaction took me by surprise, but it's completely understandable. I love the way you describe Erik in this story. So needful of Christine's love; so passionate; so determined to win her heart. Wonderful writing, this story is at the top of my favorites.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only read chapters 17 and 18 and..oh my! Please continue very soon! I want them to do it. All the it, not just the foreplay! ^^; Meh, but I suppose the teasing makes it all the better than it actually comes.
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm.....Well...(clears throat) That was truly impressive! I'm at a loss for words.
Your details and overall flow of the story are better than most published authors! I felt a myriad of emotions reading this part. Christine and Erik's sadness and regret over life's cruelty is so heartbreaking it pierces the soul! When their passions "merge as one" :) , it is a beautiful, steamy, intense and RIGHT moment! They share something really special and I truly, truly hope they can complete each other not just now but always! (Still pushing for a happier ending!)
I hope Christine will realize that Erik was actually being somewhat noble and unselfish by stopping that rather steamy interlude! Again, I feel Erik and Christine's relationship is based on a more mature foundation and is definitely more wickedly passionate ;) than the relationship she will ever have with Raoul!
Raoul is too much of a "wet sock" when it comes to the emotions he inspires in her and his aspirations for life seen very weak. At least Erik appears more grounded considering he is musically talented, a craftsman with wood and an overall artist. Raoul's only talent seems to be whining, which is a very child-like characteristic I might add!
This chapter definitely caused me to reconsider the plank but I don't know if you're completely forgiven for leaving us hanging once again! You will just have to update this phenomenal story soon to guarantee you won't have to walk it!
Seriously, great job with this chapter and the overall story. I have read a lot of Phantom stories out there, but this one has pushed its way to the top as my #1 favorite! BRAVO!
Your details and overall flow of the story are better than most published authors! I felt a myriad of emotions reading this part. Christine and Erik's sadness and regret over life's cruelty is so heartbreaking it pierces the soul! When their passions "merge as one" :) , it is a beautiful, steamy, intense and RIGHT moment! They share something really special and I truly, truly hope they can complete each other not just now but always! (Still pushing for a happier ending!)
I hope Christine will realize that Erik was actually being somewhat noble and unselfish by stopping that rather steamy interlude! Again, I feel Erik and Christine's relationship is based on a more mature foundation and is definitely more wickedly passionate ;) than the relationship she will ever have with Raoul!
Raoul is too much of a "wet sock" when it comes to the emotions he inspires in her and his aspirations for life seen very weak. At least Erik appears more grounded considering he is musically talented, a craftsman with wood and an overall artist. Raoul's only talent seems to be whining, which is a very child-like characteristic I might add!
This chapter definitely caused me to reconsider the plank but I don't know if you're completely forgiven for leaving us hanging once again! You will just have to update this phenomenal story soon to guarantee you won't have to walk it!
Seriously, great job with this chapter and the overall story. I have read a lot of Phantom stories out there, but this one has pushed its way to the top as my #1 favorite! BRAVO!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"The desire to love and nurture the sensuality in another seemed so very selfless and right, as if nothing in the world could ever feel more perfect than the touch of a lover’s bare skin upon your own."
- That passage gave me the chills, it's so beautifully poetic and so real.. raw.. just perfect!
job well done.. eagerly awaiting the next installment.. keep at it :) i love reading your work!!
- That passage gave me the chills, it's so beautifully poetic and so real.. raw.. just perfect!
job well done.. eagerly awaiting the next installment.. keep at it :) i love reading your work!!
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Boo Yeah!!!
umm, yup, that's pretty much all i've got to say, lol. :D Nice Erik won out in the end, I see :D (you could bring Marquis de Sade Erik back... you know, if you wanted... might be fun... heh heh heh)
umm, yup, that's pretty much all i've got to say, lol. :D Nice Erik won out in the end, I see :D (you could bring Marquis de Sade Erik back... you know, if you wanted... might be fun... heh heh heh)
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June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter and worth the wait! I like that Erik has had some "practice" in lovemaking and yet feels like its all for the first time with Christine. Cruel author, I am begging you for the "climax" just like Christine begged Erik for hers...LOL!