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(Jumping up and down) Bad author! Bad author! So evil leaving us with a cliffe!!!!
You'd best update soon or my infamous plank may have to come out! I'd hate for a certain author to be forced to walk it!
Seriously, a beautifully written chapter. There was so much pent up emotion in it! What a tragic life for Erik! You decribed it so perfectly I could picture every detail!
Erik definitely has to end up with Christine! Please for the love of all that is decent!
If Christine cannot forgive him after he had the courage to reveal his story, I swear I will have lost all respect for her!
In case you haven't guessed, this chapter caused my emotions to run high. You've done a beautiful job with the progression of the story. Please keep up the good work and update soon!
Still waiting for the chapter! You know which one I mean! :)

Great beginning of the story ! Love the way you described the opposites between raoul and erik. Lovely descriptions, none too long, great, Great choice of words ! I'm already loving this ! Wonder what'll happen... I just LOOOOOOVVVEE erik fanfic and yours is a winner !! Keep up the work and let us rejoice in erikicity..

ahhh, a cliffhanger of sorts :x update.. i wanna read more, i'm so enthralled!
awesome job, such vivid use of language. your storytelling of erik's past was perfect.
the way you write, i'm able to picture ALL this happening, moment by moment in my mind.
killer job!!!

gimme more :)

I love how in your story you have Erik and Christine feel such a raw need for each other. Looking forward to what happens after the kiss...

Oh... god... update... soon... please... *gasping with indignation that you left it there*
Lol! Well, as you can see, I liked that chapter lots! :D

Are you trying to give a person a heart attack!!!! I mean you cannot just leave us all hanging on like that...It's cruel! So please come back soon and post another chapter before we all die of anticipation. On another note, that was a freakin awesome chapter and so full of the angst you do so well. Great way to blend both Kay and elements of ALW and yourself all together and I loved the Erik and Christine :) :)

Great work!

I have just about caught up with reading all of this story and have really enjoyed it so far. The Marquis de Sade chapter was brilliant. And I like the Sofia character a lot.

That was a perfect place to end the chapter. I loved it! I feel so sorry for Erik, and I hope that Christine can help him to forget, or at least heal from, his tortured past.

oh, wow, so beautiful!! pleasepdate soon!

i just finished chapter sixteen, and i am dyyyying to find out more. like many, i'm really anxious for a racey scene between Erik and Christine, however inappropriate that might sound. i found a link to your site through livejournal and i must say i am hooked! i'm distraught over the fact, as of right now, there is nothing more for me to read. since i've dedicated the past 2.5 days to reading your work, and i might add i am supremely impressed! writing is a favorite hobby of mine, and i'm attending a nearby university this fall as a Creative Writing major. reading something of this caliber.. completely floors me! i wish i had such a beautiful way with words. one can only hope with practice and diligence, the impressive skills will soon follow. your author notes are helpful as well... and your language is.. amazing! i hope you will posting another chapter or two in the near future before i keel over in anticipation. pardon the repetitive remarks i've shared with you thus far. let me just say this: i've read plenty of fan fiction in my day (both erotic and non) and i must say, you're one of the best i've read! a compliment i'm sure you've heard many a time, but regardless - i felt it necessary to share. please let me know when/if you'll be continuing this story, i'd love to follow along. thank you for sharing!!!