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May 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another awesome chapter and might I say, a very hot one at that! I love the conflict playing out in Christine and I must say you have given her more will power than most might have :) But I will not stand for a cliffhanger, so please post soon :)
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Dazed look on face) Wow! That was a great chapter!
What an emotional rollercoaster ride!
I'm glad Phillipe and Raoul are gone for awhile longer and I think it was also a nice touch having them talk about things but also hinting at things best left unsaid.
The discussion between Christine and Erik was great too. The point you made about him talking to her as a man and not "her Phantom" or "Angel" was a nice touch! Loved the humorous arguing between them! (By the way, I hate spiders too!!!!)
Nice way to shift my emotions by having Erik take care of Christine while she was sick but also thinking naughty thoughts at the same time! :) That's our Phantom!!!!
Very nicely done. I'm emotionally spent.
I think I'll go lie down now.....
BRAVO!
Please remember to update soon! :)
What an emotional rollercoaster ride!
I'm glad Phillipe and Raoul are gone for awhile longer and I think it was also a nice touch having them talk about things but also hinting at things best left unsaid.
The discussion between Christine and Erik was great too. The point you made about him talking to her as a man and not "her Phantom" or "Angel" was a nice touch! Loved the humorous arguing between them! (By the way, I hate spiders too!!!!)
Nice way to shift my emotions by having Erik take care of Christine while she was sick but also thinking naughty thoughts at the same time! :) That's our Phantom!!!!
Very nicely done. I'm emotionally spent.
I think I'll go lie down now.....
BRAVO!
Please remember to update soon! :)
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May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Forgot to say, I hope you're feeling better.
Hate those nasty headaches!
Sometimes visually focusing on something else helps (Erik's naked chest....Erik's naked chest....) OR (Steamy chapter is next, steamy chapter is next!....) :)
Sorry, could not resist!
Feel better soon and update! Saavy?
Hate those nasty headaches!
Sometimes visually focusing on something else helps (Erik's naked chest....Erik's naked chest....) OR (Steamy chapter is next, steamy chapter is next!....) :)
Sorry, could not resist!
Feel better soon and update! Saavy?
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May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I just love anything about that story... especially bringing Raoul's family into this. And Christine is so hideously hilarious when drunk - I'd kick her out whenever she starts her second glass of wine at my party!! *lol*
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your opening and the story line was very creative and kept me interested. I hope you continue to write other fics just as good or better.
M.H.
M.H.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Half-naked erik sweating out in the sun, drunk christine, i love it. I love the way you are writing your story, its one of my absolute favorites on this site. Keep up the good work, and thanks so much for the consistant updates.
xxJENxx
xxJENxx
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I love houw you have advanced the conflict element between Erik and Christine as well as giving Erik some erious emotional depth. A drunk Christine was so much fun too! The buildup you are creating as me on the edge of my seat so please post more soon!
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Does the happy dance of joy) Yeah I made it into the reviews! (Dancing even harder) Yeah Erik is naked from the waist up!!! :)
(Smile changes to slight pout) No steamy chapters yet but I do understand having to explain things first. Anticipation is everything!
Well, Erik had his drowned cat experience and now it is Christine's turn! :) It's nice to see our dear Phantom is not as immune as he would like when he sees her drenched. Did the book have to buy it though? ;(
Seriously, I enjoyed this chapter for several reasons. Raoul will be stuck in London for awhile which will give our dear Phantom possibly more time to work on Christine. :)
Also, it was nice to see Christine realize maybe she does not like Erik's indifference to her. Revelation time!
They really are better for each other than Christine and Raoul. Their relationship is too child-like and as Christine is becoming more of a woman she needs a more adult relationship (and Erik is quite the adult!) ;)
I'm still going to push for them to end up together in the end! Erik's life has been so horrible I don't think it is sugar-coating it to have all the coflict and still have them be together.
(Sheepishly steps off of soap box) Sorry, got carried away.
Nice writing. Please keep up the great work and update soon!!!
I cannot wait for the steamy chapter!!!!
BRAVO!
(Smile changes to slight pout) No steamy chapters yet but I do understand having to explain things first. Anticipation is everything!
Well, Erik had his drowned cat experience and now it is Christine's turn! :) It's nice to see our dear Phantom is not as immune as he would like when he sees her drenched. Did the book have to buy it though? ;(
Seriously, I enjoyed this chapter for several reasons. Raoul will be stuck in London for awhile which will give our dear Phantom possibly more time to work on Christine. :)
Also, it was nice to see Christine realize maybe she does not like Erik's indifference to her. Revelation time!
They really are better for each other than Christine and Raoul. Their relationship is too child-like and as Christine is becoming more of a woman she needs a more adult relationship (and Erik is quite the adult!) ;)
I'm still going to push for them to end up together in the end! Erik's life has been so horrible I don't think it is sugar-coating it to have all the coflict and still have them be together.
(Sheepishly steps off of soap box) Sorry, got carried away.
Nice writing. Please keep up the great work and update soon!!!
I cannot wait for the steamy chapter!!!!
BRAVO!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have not since enjoyed a "Phantom of the Opera" fanfic like this since Susan Kay. Which I truly thought she had captured the phantom in all of his glory.
I like that fact Erik is not a weak sniveling dog, begging for Christine's slightest touch. I like the fact that he is still virile and passionate, and lethal at the same time. Not to mention I actually "like" the character of Christine...which is something profound, believe me! ( Always thought her to be a fool to pass up a dark and sensual relationship as she did.)
Wonderfully written and I look forward to the next update.
I like that fact Erik is not a weak sniveling dog, begging for Christine's slightest touch. I like the fact that he is still virile and passionate, and lethal at the same time. Not to mention I actually "like" the character of Christine...which is something profound, believe me! ( Always thought her to be a fool to pass up a dark and sensual relationship as she did.)
Wonderfully written and I look forward to the next update.
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just came across this story by accident and read all 13 chapters in one sitting! I really love the way you keep Erik a conflicted character who wants to possess Christine and yet is afarid to and I love that Christine has a backbone. Also, nice job keeping Raoul a likable character ~ so often in POTO fanfics he becomes just a crazy jealous man. Either way, I am loving the Erik and Christine action so far and bravo on the Sofia character as well; every good teacher must have had one before ;) Kepp up the great work and I can't wait for the next chapter!