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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! An update! Hahaha, I just about died when it said he was working naked... to the waist. Oh. :D Dang, that's not what I was hoping for!
Anyhoo... I like! Bring on the smut! (in your own time, of course. lol.)
Anyhoo... I like! Bring on the smut! (in your own time, of course. lol.)
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is... When's chapter 13 up? I can't wait!
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May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12
(Puts head in hands) OHHH! I thought this was going to be the steamy chapter! I am sitting here on pins and needles waiting for that chapter! Please update soon!
(More humbly) I did enjoy this chapter because it showed the continuing conflict Christine is having with her attraction to Erik and her fear of him. It was also rather amusing to read that Erik was dashing to her door to avoid getting wet. I know it was supposed to be a more serious scene but I couldn't help having this silly image in my mind of him behaving like a cat that got drenched! :) Sorry.
I truly have my fingers crossed that Erik and Christine can come together not only physically but emotionally. They really do complete each other whether they realize it or not!
Great writing as always! Please, please update soon! :)
BRAVO!
(Puts head in hands) OHHH! I thought this was going to be the steamy chapter! I am sitting here on pins and needles waiting for that chapter! Please update soon!
(More humbly) I did enjoy this chapter because it showed the continuing conflict Christine is having with her attraction to Erik and her fear of him. It was also rather amusing to read that Erik was dashing to her door to avoid getting wet. I know it was supposed to be a more serious scene but I couldn't help having this silly image in my mind of him behaving like a cat that got drenched! :) Sorry.
I truly have my fingers crossed that Erik and Christine can come together not only physically but emotionally. They really do complete each other whether they realize it or not!
Great writing as always! Please, please update soon! :)
BRAVO!
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh this is fun! Promising to be lovely and steamy... Don't keep us waiting too long for those two weeks, now ;D
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 10
(SP fanning herself vigorously) Whew! That was a steamy chapter!!! I can't wait for the two weeks to arrive. Please hurry and write that part. The suspense is killing me!
You write Erik exceptionally well. He is very easy to imagine acting just as you portray him. Nice writing of Christine as well! :)
It's a great day when there is an update for this story.
Good job!
(SP fanning herself vigorously) Whew! That was a steamy chapter!!! I can't wait for the two weeks to arrive. Please hurry and write that part. The suspense is killing me!
You write Erik exceptionally well. He is very easy to imagine acting just as you portray him. Nice writing of Christine as well! :)
It's a great day when there is an update for this story.
Good job!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11
OH YEAH! (SP fans herself harder)
I don't think Erik has to worry about Christine not wanting him! :)
Let's just hope that she can realize what she has with Raoul will never amount to what she could have with Erik!
This story is wonderful! Please update soon with the start of the two weeks. Can't wait!
BRAVO!
OH YEAH! (SP fans herself harder)
I don't think Erik has to worry about Christine not wanting him! :)
Let's just hope that she can realize what she has with Raoul will never amount to what she could have with Erik!
This story is wonderful! Please update soon with the start of the two weeks. Can't wait!
BRAVO!
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh this is so good!! please update
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooooooo **tingles with excitement** i love this story... i can't wait to see what happens... update soon!
"will u be a gentlemen?"
"yes." no.
ahahaha i loved that.
"will u be a gentlemen?"
"yes." no.
ahahaha i loved that.
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April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This story is great!!! I stumbled across it and started reading and before I knew it I'd blown through the first nine chapters!
Excellent detailing of Erik. I think you've captured all his nuances very well! I recently read some of your other stories and I do have one suggestion. Could you possibly write a story where he actually ends up with Christine?
I know that may not be your writing style but Erik can still have all the suffering and torment but not the complete loneliness maybe. Just a thought...
I don't want to step on any toes and I do love the way you write your stories. Erik just had so many hard breaks it seems like he should have some happiness to break the cycle of despair.
You write him and the rest of the characters beautifully and it is easy for the reader to fall into the story!
BRAVO!
Excellent detailing of Erik. I think you've captured all his nuances very well! I recently read some of your other stories and I do have one suggestion. Could you possibly write a story where he actually ends up with Christine?
I know that may not be your writing style but Erik can still have all the suffering and torment but not the complete loneliness maybe. Just a thought...
I don't want to step on any toes and I do love the way you write your stories. Erik just had so many hard breaks it seems like he should have some happiness to break the cycle of despair.
You write him and the rest of the characters beautifully and it is easy for the reader to fall into the story!
BRAVO!
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April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don't approve of people having one-night stands or affairs or flings. Sex should always be between two people whom love each other, and maybe, if all goes well, will eventually marry, or stay together forever (for gays, bys, and heterosexuals). However, I agree that it would be nice for both people, or one of them, be experts in love-making. Interesting turn of events. Will Eric stay with the widow or continue pursuing Christine? Hmmm...