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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like Mary. She's ballsy, but she's got facets. Keep writing! I can't wait to read more.
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June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh the tension, the drama, the thrill! Yoi, yoi. Very good indeed! Write more please; I want to know what happens between Asher and MJ! Please more!
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June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for the prompt update! Sorry for them having the bad dreams. More please.
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June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yummy dinner scene! Makes me hungry although I must admit I may be hungry for more meat than potatoes. Good to see she ran into Asher even though both of them seem to have been arrogant and stubborn at the time. I'm waiting for more please.
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May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. Very, very nicely done. I definitely liked. I can't wait for the next scene! I'm totally hooked. The idea of a female assasin who doesn't carry a gun... let's just say that she appeals to my inner femenist. Also, you might want to talk about what she uses, ie ken-po or karate or pressure points, instead of weapons, because, as a reader, I for one am interested. Also, perhaps a bit about how she met Edward or what she and Anita think about each other. For your next chapter, I am really hoping *crosses fingers for luck* to hear about how she meets Asher. Good luck, keep writing, and please continue on this story!
-BelleRose
-BelleRose
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May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING this story! Pls pls keep writing! Can't wait to read the rest!
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May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapters. There are some very fine smut writers on this board. Keep reading, you'll find them.
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very good start. I can't wait to read more of the story.
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April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still reading and hoping for more. I would like some clarification on some points and hope that will be coming. Is MJ the person having the dreams about Billy? Hard to tell where the action is sometimes, such as Guilty Pleasures, Anita's place or MJ's place (wherever that is). Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
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April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, very creepy. I also love the new addition (Mary Jane), I've been wanting a new female character in the series to lift some of the limelight off of Anita. Love Anita, but sometimes you just got to get away from her. Can't wait to see how Mare and Asher meet.