rate_review Reviews

I love each and very single chapter in this fic, and even knowing what was coming... you killed me there! Good ridance, Caramon wise. Dalamar can take better care of Raist, and he's far less irritating *nod nod* But even while thinking so, I can't help but feel a bit sorry for Caramon. After all, you were right: he's lost without Raistlin.
As I see it, we have a lot of pain coming up, but it will be a pleasure to rediscover the Chronicles through their eyes. Thanks!

And there's more! Very interesting take on the Soul Forge. I wonder what Caramon will be like the next time they meet :) Well, once again, my hat's off to you for writing such a wonderful story and giving me an excuse to stay on the computer for hours on end :P

I'm patiently chasing all of your RXD stories and reading them in what I hope is chronological order.

Kovenant might've been a fluke, but add Siouxie and crown it with Manson, and you have excellent taste in both slash and music.

Thank you again, for what is obviously a great deal of work and effort. I'm utterly out of books and in no position to get any more, and until I stumbled across you I thought I'd have to, explode.

I'm something of a writer myself, and if I saw any real messes I'd tell you so; really egregious grammar errors, silliness, etc--that which jars you out of the story--and since I haven't been jarred out I don't think you're making any large messes (or small ones, for that matter) A creature with good taste and a brain! I'm delighted you exist. : )

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I've no idea why it's hiding my email--perhaps because I'm not really a member? I don't seen much point in becoming one, as I can't seem to write non-original fiction no matter how badly I want to.

well, should you want it for any reason, it's thenineteen@hotmail.com (though I suppose it may hide that, as well)

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Wow. I'm really behind the times, aren't I? Well, I'll let you know everything as soon as I finish reading, but I'm very glad you decided to do a sequel.

--Analia

Well gladly at least you weren´t burn´t :)
And yes Kit did earned that, actually she should have been hitted more often, just to show her that she is not the god almighty walkin on the earth.
This is just wrong that this fiction hasn´t have so many rewiews and wiews what it should have had. I guess that there is just too few DL yaoi fans. :(
But don´t let miscourage you, you are gifted writer and only way to accomplish any fortune and fame is too do lots of hard work. (I myself know since I am an artist)

aaaaaaaaaaaaakkkkk!! You wrote a sequel!! i love you!!! *lol* more more more more!! why wasnt this one posted at elfhome!? i could have read it earlier!!! have been re-reading enigma to sustain myself! $laugh* either way i love your writing, write more, especially dally/raist goodness! got any more stories up your sleeve that youve been hiding from me? oh and for god sakes, post this on elfhome!!! ha! ha!
bisous from the now deliriously happy Safire

*this review writen before finishing reading all of the fic written so far* Are you really going to rewrite all off chronicles and legends? If so, I'll continue reading eagerly. I really love the way you break the characters down. And I'm quite looking forward to reading the test....

*has now finished the fanfic up to this point* I just thought of something...The whole plan to meet up again in 5 years...is not as likely to happen any more. With the way Dal and Raist now feel about the others, the opening to Chronicles might not happen, and therefore, all chronicles would be changed drastically, if it even happened at all. Now I'm even more eager to see how you resolve this.

When I first started reading Ice and Steel, I had read most of the Soulforge (I had wanted to get the third before I read about his test). So I recognized parts from the book, and enjoyed the way you bring Dalamar in without really changing the story. Then last night, I started rereading it, and almost finished. Then I come back to the computer, and you've updated. So this time I read it from the beginning once again, and enjoy it even more. You keep the characters in character amazingly well, and your writing style is quite good. Every now and then you have a typo, but that's very hard to avoid. And really, I only noticed it once when the man Kit speaks to is talking about why he smells of liquor. Keep writing, please, cause I await your next chapter eagerly.