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great story, i love it.

I can't remember if I reviewed this already but if I did whatever lol, this fic is amazing and its my favorite dragonlance fic that I've read, so please please update soon I will love you forever.

I hope you finish the story...it's really good.

This is a wonderful story! You really should get around to writting more. I'd love to know what happens when Raistlin goes to take his test. How his change affects Tika. Keep up the good work!

Rast and Caramon are twins. Always wondered what would happen if he got away from his brother and got his confidence in non-magic related areas up a bit. He probably has a lot of potential to be physically fit if he tried and didn't rely on his brother for everything. Anyway I can very much see this happening in canon if things had gone differently. Tika being plain looking and a bit of a tomboy when she was younger and Raist being in a similiar outcast situation although Raist is a lot worse. Plus Caramon is a bit of a man whore as he's described at various points in the books. Tika deserves better, and Raist definetly deserves better then what he got. Great writing, intersting steady plot and flow. Keep writing.

What do you think of the new DL books by the main authors. I only read the War of Lost Souls not the new book they're writing, but frankly i'd like to see the companions come back or at least be referenced in some capacity. I'll only read the new books if they do so. I have faint interest at best in Mina and the god of death, and the other assorted new charecters. You read them at all. Once again, keep writing. My current favorite story.

very good. i like muches. plz update soon!

great! Please continue, its a real sweet story, who knows how raistlin would've turned out with a womens love?

Simply amazing. Your writing is fantastic and this pairing just works in my eyes, I've begun to think that if this pairing happened in the DL universe Raist might've actually become a white robed wizard.

I loved it! I have always thought of what would happen between them.... I think that you have done a lovely job of writing this. I have one question and one small problem though. (?): Will you write any more on this fic? (Prob.): Otik would have known Raistlins name due to fact the he helped out when the twins mother and father died. That's all... Thank you.

Great story, always loved Raislin. The concept of Tika and Raist together is actually very plausible. No one can argue that Raist wouldn't fall for her, if Caramon did so would he. Plus he fall for that other girl quickly enough in soulforge. Plus Raistlin does look a lot like his twin and doesn't socialize enough to knoiw what people think of him. Proof in point is Crysania falling for him.
Anyway I hope you expand on this. Raistlin could maybe have the strength to defeat Fistandilus when he takes the test and become more powerfull then he originally did. Or Tika could go with Sturm and Kit and she never becomes a dragonlord. Forgive me if you don't like Kit as much as I do. Anyway wright on.
PS - Do you know of any good DL fic sites, crossover or otherwise. And not yaoi -gay- stuff either. Not a fan of that.