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I doubt you're reading this because this fanfic was written like 16 years ago, but it is amazing! It's the best Hook x Wendy fanfic I think I've ever read. 

This was definitely one of my favorite neverland stories. Greatly enjoyed the romance between Hook and Wendy and loved the ending. Great job!!

No this is not a good story. Hook is not seducing her, he's forcing her, it's rape, so no matter how you write it as Wendy giving in he's going back on his word. This is despicable because you're teaching young girls that as long as you enjoy it then it counts as consent. It's naive and repulsive.

That was the best Hook/Wendy fanfic I have ever read (and I have read a lot)! I love how you portrayed the main characters and especially Hook. The changes of his character through the plot because of Wendy's love was incredible. The soft or more human side of him was showed very well. I liked very much Wendy's attitude through the story and her courage to face extreme dangers in order to protect her loved one. She managed to earn the respect and love of the crew - that was also great! The plot was fantastic and brilliant. The Blackbeard story was nice, the fairy queen was ingenious addition and the 'Hook and Pan work together' was awesome. I LOVE IT! Everything in it; plot, characters, adventure, romance. Thank you very very much for sharing this wonderful story!

First of all, I have to tell you that you almost gave me a heart attack per chapter, especially when John almost succeded in his plan of taking Wendy away. By that part I was already bawling my eyes out.
You are a magnificent writer! I can't remember the last time a story had such a hold and inffluence in me. Even compared to some books that I've read recently. I really can't find enough words to tell you how much I adored your story (and plan on reading it again!).
I quite understand the difficulty of writting in a foreign language (English is a foreign language for me as well), but you overcame it and were able to write this amazing story! And I must congratulate you for that!
From the moment I started, I simply couldn't stop reading. Going to school and sleep left me frustrated because I wanted to keep reading and know what would happen!!! You made me fall in love with Hook, ship Wendy and Hook (I shipped her and Peter before. Huge mistake!), and loathe John! And, as I already said, I was crying rivers when John took Wendy of the island. If you have watched Doctor Who and the end of the second season, you'll know how I felt with the thought of those two getting sepparated.
Ah, and I loved your fanfic so much that I'll write a review about it in my blog. I hope you don't mind. When it comes out, I'll be sure to send you the link.
I'm waiting hopefully for a sequel! :D
Keep up the wonderful job!!!

I think this is one of my favorite Hook/Wendy stories and if you ask me there are far too few of them out here. (My only complaint is that the first six chapters have not been edited.) I certainly would love a continuation if you can find the inspiration to do so. I think a lot of fans would at least like a secondary epilogue stating not just where but possibly when in time Neverland released them. And if they ended up in Wendy's time, there is the nearing world war, as well as the chance to reconnect with her family. (though I think John should be sleeping in the dog house for a while this time) After all, it managed to touch on Hook's timeline and pull Blackbeard in. And I personally would like to think that even if the chains that kept Hook trapped are gone that there could still be some kind of connection between Hook, Wendy, Peter and that land. In a way they are now allies which one would think is a bond both stronger and more forgiving than hate. I know it's probably a bad idea but some part of me can't help but wonder what would happen if things got mixed up with characters from Pirates of the Carribean. As that is also the same era that Hook seems to have come from. And after reading your Battle for Neverland which managed to blend Peter Pan with Lord of the Rings, I feel you are one of the few authors out there who could pull off such a mix and do it well. And I'm not usually one who likes to read crossovers. I certainly hope that you continue to write fiction for Peter Pan. I'm also hoping that you will decide to translate some of your other works to English.

Loved your story, and your imperfect knowledge of the language makes it especially impressive how you've made it so good! I'd be happy to edit this for you, even though it's done, because it's such a great story--tried emailing you, but it didn't go through.

That was the most AMAZING story i have read for a long time! You took all the characters and made them your own... i wish it was a real book :(

Great story. I can't keep myself from the monitor until I finish it. It took me almost a week or a little less. Can't wait to read the sequel. You have great talent as a story teller. And you have gain my respect, admiration, to add you as favorite author also here in AFF. Keep the magnificent work. I will definetively track your works.

DF

OH, how much I wish to read a sequel of yours! It would be wonderful. And by the end of this story your english was vastly better than more people I know.