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for In the swirl of passion

by Lywhn

person Lyssa
schedule January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the best stories that I have ever read. I hope you write a sequal. I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Emeraldfire
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic story! I've enjoyed reading every chapter for the past week. I only wish we knew if Wendy and Hook ever saw her family and brothers again. Where do they sail to? Also in what time period do they arrive Hook or Wendy's? Lots of questions..... I have a great imagination though, not near as creative as yours!!!!
person CL
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Especially how you grew both Wendy and James. Thank you for the energy and effort and JOY you put in this tale!!

person avanell
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoyed your story...i recently found my muse (on vacation) for my own wendy/hook story and this was one that helped inspire it again. maybe I should ask for your expertise for certain...um...scenes ;) You really did them well...especially their first time together.
person Charley
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say I've been following this story since its beginning and I think it's amazing! The characterization of Wendy and James is just excellent and you just can't help understanding why James is so darn lovable!
Well worth staying with and thankyou for the journey.

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person kristina
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I just had to leave a review for this story to let you know that I have really been enjoying it. Its taking me a while to read it because I usually sneak read chapters when I'm at work, hehehe, but I look forward to reading more of it every day. I just wanted to let you know that its really great!
Kristina
person Amy
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is absoloutly fantastic! I'm dying to see what happens next....so update ASAP ok?!
person PhantasmBunny
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D i really like your story. sehr toll! and, yes, while the English grammar/word-choice is a little rough at times, it's still very impressive that you're writing a story in a language besides German. keep up the good work, and never be discouraged. i look forward to reading more.
person gabby
schedule December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
send her back!!!!!!!!! dont end the story there please! send her back, have james go and get her from londen, or somthing like that, PLEASE!!!!!!!!!! im adictted to this story, update, please
person Anon
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
she has a gun shoot him
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