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hi, since english isn't my native language, I can't write much.
But I love your story so much, I like the way you've built your characters, esp captain James Hook --> a new look about him, very cute, ... and human. >_<
Can't wait to see how our captain "rescue" him beauty?!?!?
Anyway, thank for your story ^_^

Hi Anon,
just to get several things right: 1.) I am 35, so you can say that I am certainly an ault; 2.) reagarding the choice of the title: just have a look on the titles of romance-novels (also written by adults, as far as I know): they often alike; 3.) I've read the book several times since I was twelve, have watched the different animated TV-showes and films, and I don't think that the persons too much out of character - after all an adult Wendy reacts in another way as the child Wendy, and for Peter it must be hard to realize that he can't win always and even he makes mistakes, and even Barrie wrote that Hook isn't total evil, so hey, why not a change for him?; 4.) sexual activities in connection with love is NO smut in my eyes, and 5.) if you don't like to read adult-stuff or espcially this story, then just don't do it. And - by the way - fantasy is a free.
Kind regards
Lywhn

Oh, dear. You're much too young to be writing smut, for one thing. No adult would name their story "In the swirl of passion". I mean really. For another thing, you've never even read the book. You're a kid who's seen the movie and thought everyone was TEH HOTT!!!!!1111 This is evidenced by the fact that you know nothing of the characters.

I love this story, please update soon.

Wow! I hope that you continue this story. I want to know who wins the bet and where it is going. I spend like 4 days reading this story between classes and after homework and between talking to friends and such. I really want to know what is going to happen next. I love this story. Please continue soon.

I read the first chapter of your work and must say: wonderful!!! Great that you started to write a fic in English, I'm also from germany and don't have the courage to write an English story. I fear, my spelling is too poor. Well thanks for sharing this hot tale! Greetz! Byrk

*huggles author*
i LOVE every minute of it!!!
KEEEEEEEP IT UP!!!
cya
Kat

I love it sooooooooooo much!!! UPDATE it!
cya
Kat

yet again I am left in suspense

Chapter 12, a stolen day....had me crying! You really know how to convey the tenderness between Hook and Wendy in such beautiful ways. I love this story, and your portrayal of Hook and Wendy is right on.