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September 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I read it all in one day and I want to keep going. cant wait for the rest.
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my goodness!!! I believe this is the best story I've ever read. I was never big on the story of peter pan but now... whoa
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September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 7....I love how you're building such a wonderful emotional connection between Hook and Wendy. The reader really gets the sense of their growing love for eachother. Bravo. Who cares about the spelling mistakes...the essense is good, the characters have so many dimentions, and the story is wonderful...I love the coupling of Hook and Wendy.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter one: all I can say is wow. I've always loved Peter Pan, and a part of me was always attracked to Hook's character. This is a fantasy come true. You're a good writer....your descriptions heat up the page (and me too lol!).
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story! keep it up!
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August 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for more!!!
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon its really good
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August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon its really good
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August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is spectacular and I can't wait to read more, please, I beg of you, continue before I die of suspense.
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August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved your story but the one thin that sucks is that if you update we (readers) don't know untill we look..but anyway i loved it great job!!