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for In the swirl of passion

by Lywhn

person mary
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Can't wait to read the next chapter!
person AngelBabie4132
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i LOVE ur story and i hope u continue...what is ur native language by the way?
person jenniferr68
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is wonderfully written. Thank you for sharing your talent, we look forward to reading the completed story.
person lilly
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another Awesome chapter. gods, I love this story. Please continue and update soon.
person ljasell
schedule June 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Even good stories are painful to read when the grammar is bad. Please find a beta.
person lilly
schedule May 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You have done it again. I love the chapter and the story. Please continue.
person Kylie
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think that this is a very well written story. There is a perfect blend of plot and smut, and I am glad that Hook didn't just rape her and she didn't just give in. I like how you ended the first chapter with her escaping the Jolly Roger. Keep up the good work.
person mary
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is really good! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter!
person Enelya
schedule May 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE! Continue this fic or I swear I will die! iPor favor! s'il vous plaĆ®t! per favore! пожалуйста! PLEEEAAASE!!!
person lilly
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another awesome chapter. please continue
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