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I can't wait for your next chapter. Please write soon. I skim the Jovanko parts, just to let you know. Sorry. I await Raoul's reaction..

hurry! next chapter! plz?

Please continue soon. This is a great story and I'm dying to know what happens next.

xxkatyxx

Aw that part where he had the monkey music box because it reminded him of his only ever gift was so sad and sweet, i am going to miss this fic while i am away

Angela

I'm liking the development of your story, Salome. The part that I liked best involved his time with the gypsies.

You're also very close to ALW's canon version of Phantom, though if he had affection in his past, what caused him to still be so bitter? Did something happen to the wife?

The sex scene was also very good, you could easily visualize what was going on, the only detail I might change is the fact that if she was a virgin and it was that painful (as it is, yep) then if she didn't get up afterwords, there'd be more than one spot of blood on the sheets.

Lovely fic. But that is it. No more. I will love to read more. ;P

Wonderful (Chapter 3) Your story is even better reading it in the right order ;) I love your writing and look forward to many more fics by you

Angela

Aww! That was so sweet. Very well done love scene. Good job.

oh yes, please continue! let them get it on!!!

Aww! Update soon please!