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March 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
There still needs to be more of this story. It is just too hot to ignore.
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April 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was extremely hot, but ended way too quickly. Have you considered writing a sequel or a companion?
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September 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Holy dear christ, that was good! Oh, I wish you wrote more!
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June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very well done and I hope you will do a sequel or continuation one day. 5 out 5 stars!
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January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a great story. You should consider making it a little longer, more threesomes.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Alright the story was pretty amazing it impressed and the flow of it was well done. However spellcheck does good but it doesn't catch everything take the time to read over your story after using spellcheck just to be safe. The text mishaps weren't plentiful and you could still understand what was being said but it did interrupt the flow and general move things reminded you that it was just a story at some of the wrong times. but other than that the story was amazing and I'd look forward to reading some of your other stories.
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November 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should've had Ax get Rachel pregnant, man. A human giving birth to a Andalite... Take about innovative! Even Fanfiction.net's Animorphs section wouldn't be able to ignore the shockwaves of that plot twist!
Better yet, both Erek and Toby catch Shinto-Taga, Marco gets Toby pregnant (with a human baby) and Erek somehow gets Cassie pregnant with a baby Chee as the result!
Better yet, both Erek and Toby catch Shinto-Taga, Marco gets Toby pregnant (with a human baby) and Erek somehow gets Cassie pregnant with a baby Chee as the result!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was definatly the best fan fic ever!!! EVER!!! I like that it makes sence, its not like jake just sudenly decides to have an orgy, it makes sence, and explains its explainations... the andalite mutation thing was genuis, i think you should continue this, maybe not all at once, i just mean like add a chapter every now and then, a month is a very long time... Please o please continue this series...
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November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you rock at writing these so write more please.
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October 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!