rate_review Reviews

that was really good. Maybe the next one could have them morph into different creatures.

This was pretty close to getting a 5. But some grammer errors (not terribly important, but still) and a weak sex scene kept it back. And by a weak sex scene, I don't mean in detail, you were okay on that end, but you didn't break new ground with it either. Cassie gave oral to Rachel, Rachel gave oral to Cassie... and you stopped there? Why?

Verdict: Oooouuuuh, so close to getting a 5, but instead recieves a 4... out of 5.

omg!! very nice! i'm typing with one hand, you see.... ;)

that was awesome please continue i was waiting for someone to do a story on those two!