rate_review Reviews

C3 is too low for a soprano. I think you meant C6.

Your story is good, but your music theory is way off. 1. hight of note is not what brakes glass. All glass has a specific note that will cause it to brake. That note is dependent on density and quality of the glass. 2. Christine like myself is a soprano, so a high C would be in her range.

Well..;) I'd love some such singing lessons too...
As a singer myself, i believe even I could reach a high E if ERIK WAS BEHIND ME;;; sERIOUSLY NOW?
YOUR c 3 IS INDEED a C4 ! It's the contre -contre C, the very highest note a female voice can reach, ex. Mado Robin's .
If christine does the high G on queen of the night, she might, with the correct coaching get to superhigh C !

Way to go, erik. When can i get a free lesson with you ?

=Inside Erik's bachelor pad, there are two booths. One, besides the copper tub, has a sign that reads, Bathe with Erik, $50! The second one, besides his organ, has a sign that reads, Learn To Sing With Erik, $75! Erik himself lies on a chair, tied and gagged, with a sign that says, Touch Erik's merchandise, $100! A huge line of phans impatiently await their turns to go on the fun-rides. They are proud to show their faces, save for the first woman. She's got curly brown hair, lush red lips, is petite, garbed in a red gypsy peasant costume, and hiding her wide eyes beneath a red silk butterfly mask. She hands Erik's pimp/agent, Blackrosephantom, a lot of dough, drags Erik into her bedroom, and shuts the door. Whipping, banging, and screaming could be heard from inside. O_O O_o

Christine: (Slaps Erik) What's my name BITCH?!

Erik: (Weakly) Christine...

That solves the mystery of why Erik meekly calls out Christine's name each time he sees her=

=Inside the attic, at the stairs to the exit, holding up a camera phone, recording Erik's and Christine's lesson=

Whoa...i just read the comments of other readers. Some said that Christine must reach a C7 in order to break glass. Awesome! Can u imagine that many more ways, or chapters, for Erik to teach Christine? =Blushes, druels, and sets up cameras all over the Opera House to record Phantom porn, then sell it later to hungry Phantom fans=

Shame on you Hyper Henry !_! I saw Chapter 3, and felt, woohoo! More smut! Then you say you won't finish it? Oh, please do so. Thank you for encouraging us fans to run away with our lusty imaginations (we will without asking). Your tale doesn't have to have a plot. Or, if u want to, it can. But I suggest again for you to tell a tale with seven chapters, each in which Erik teaches Christine to sing higher and higher...they don't get close yet, but hey, they can't complain. Then, they reach the C7 or high C in Chapter 7. You could title your story something along the lines of Cumming To The C7. I need to write another story myself, but...need...more...inspiration...and ideas. On to read more smutty fics.
PLEASE WRITE MORE. If not this tale, then others.

oh my God...this is awesome..very well written.very exciting.i think you are so talented in this....this is so hot

this story is AWESOME......the best phantom phic i have ever read..............seriously hot.......i am thinking of registering on this site solely to read your work...........i only like Phantom ones tho

I think the people who are insisting on vocal and musical accuracy are missing the point. THIS. IS. SO. DAMN. HOT!