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for The High C

by HyperHenry

person thegoddessofdeath
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hah! I loved the play on words at the end...being a music student myself, I understand.

This is very well written...and I would like some more please!
person Royal Flush
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. Really and truly. Ain't nothin' wrong with a bit of S and M.

It made me chuckle in places, and guwaff in others... I'm not sure if that was the desired effect on your part, but it's written in such an utterly unique mannar. It's also the first Work Of Fic that I've fallen privvy to in ages that hasn't made me want to scream "Fetch forth 2,000 betas NOW!" - and for that I have to congratulate you on your command of English.

Roll up, roll up and let's see the C knock the G from it's lofty perch!

Keep it up, fo shizzle.
person Maggie
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...WOW. CONTINUE PLEASE, LIKE WOW, WOW, WOW...WOW!!!

CAN YOU TELL I THINK YOU'RE GENIUS? ;)

I SO CHALLENGE YOU TO WRITE SOMETHING EVEN STRONGER THAN THIS, LOL, WONDERFUL FIRST CHAPTER! CAN NOT WAIT FOR THE NEXT! PLEASE DON'T KEEP US WAITING! ^_^
person CassieJo
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! So wonderful! I'd love for you to continue this.
I expecially like Christine bending over to better feel where the sound comes from. I remember learning that in choir - though the rest of my lesson wasn't nearly so stimulating hers!
Is your first language German, by any chance? (just a wild guess)
person Mousey
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, that was lovely. Really. XD Smut with a musical twist is always great. I would love to see this continued! :D
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