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Oh, my. That was absolutly....AWSOME! When are you going to update next? I mean I would love to throw out some ideas for you like maybe a bondage scene....Acctually I was expecting that in the first chapter when he had abducted Aurora. And acctually yes, that is a very pretty name. It is the name of the Roman goddess for the dawn. Which is quite appropriate because he is a man that lives in everlasting night.....and then comes Aurora....his dawn. :) Hows that for appropriate. But anyhoos, you could try reading the Kama Sutra......or getting one of the Sutra's that have pictures of the positions. It would be nifty to see them experementing with the other positions....Especially since in the 1880's and the like the only known position that was used for sex was the Missionary (how dreadfully boreing) and they hadnt even ever HEARD of oral sex, in that time full of prudish Catholics it was concidered a sin to have sex in any position OTHER than the Missionary. That is western thinking for you. *rolls eyes* God bless the Kama Sutra! *yay!* heh heh heh.....there you go....have Erik find a copy of the Kama Sutra in Nadir's home and stealing it away to read it. *grin* (I just hope that he can interpret all the metaphores the it uses.)

Yeh somw of your euphemisms for sex and sexual organs are a tad cheesy and not in tune with the 19th Century. And I felt that the lubricant and the aphrodisian were kind of cheesy too.

Other than that, I am SOOOOOOOO glad you decided to add to this story. It is a great story... so please continue!!!

aw man... that was so good.
really, they are such a cute couple.
even if the phantom was scary at times ^^

That chapter rocked! lol! Update soon! I'm in love with this fanfic! It all ways leaves me whating more! ^___~

LOL Funny chapter. Why does that figure that Erik would do something like that? Update soon!

Good start, plausable plot. But please..love button? Love canal?
It's really a stretch to imagine Victorian Eric spouting 70's slang.
Otherwise, I look forward to reading how the happy couple manage to
stay a couple and be accepted publicly.

Oooh! Continue!!!

wonderful! i love it! please continue!!!!!!!!!!

Oh my Lord You have GOT TO CONTINUE THIS!!! I mean, I was all intent on it being short and sweet (or short and smutty), but now, with yoyr last few senteneces, I am thoroughly enthralled!!! MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!! That was incredible! I really wasn't expecting that!!! So hurry up and add more, or no more Erik smutties for you!!!! Mwah hah hah!!!!!

Oh, Aurora, you don't know what you're getting into... good choice! That was a fun chapter. The next on should be fun as well. LOL