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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:'( could things be any worse? Perhaps I shouldn't say that....please update soon! The suspense is going to kill me!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I don't even know what to say here. Please don't let the baron win! I'll be so sad! :'( I do love your story and your writing style though. You do Erik so well. Mainly, I admire that you have the courage to make him darker than most fics I've read, but still manage to make their love sweet and touching (in the end ;D).
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful twist! I am eagerly awaiting the next installment in dire suspense! I really like how you have taken a concept that would best suit a one-shot or smut-only fic and turned it into a captivating story. The characters are not simply vehicles used for the purpose of creating sexual fantasies, they have other dimensions that the reader grows to care about. You have also successfully added conflict and uncertainty to the plot. Speaking of plot, porn rarely has one (or a plausible one lol), but this one does. It's more like romantica - erotica with some emotional resonation. I think that you've given a story about seduction and rough, animal sex some depth. You have also successfully converted a notoriously lonely, reclusive virgin into a sexual beast, and it's quite believable (not to mention enjoyable). Great work.
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That evil ass people! >_< Erik! Kill them! lol! Please update soon! ^_~
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GODDAMMIT!! Nothing ever turns out good for these two!!! Update soon please!!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, I cannot express how much I love this fic! Your writing style is beautiful and what you have done with the characters is wonderful. Please keep writing!
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That rocked! Please update soon!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
such a short chapter--AAck! Write faster, damn you!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! Please update soon! That so rocked! ^_~ I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_~
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww! That was an interesting prelude to a proposal. Erik is so cute in his insecurity. Oh, it's going to break his heart when Aurora tells him that hse can't marry him. Or maybe she won't tell him... they could run away to some far-away place and they would never be heard from again. Then they could elope and be happy forever! Yay for my ever-romantic and strange mind!