rate_review Reviews

This is a WONDERFUL story! I can't wait to see what happens! I HATE Raoul! I'm so glad that you used the Raoul from the book, rather than from the movie. The Raoul in the movie was just....TOO nice! Anyway, PLEASE keep writing! I....must...have...more!!!

This is very good i can't wait to read more of it you did well portraying Erik

You seem like you have a really nice plot going here, and your descriptions sound like they would be lovely, but please get a beta reader. I couldn't even make it all the way through the chapter, because it's like deciphering this text from a foreign language. If English is your second language, as someone suggested, that's even more of a reason to get someone to proofread your fiction.

This looks like it would be a very sensual, moving story, but it's buried under terrible grammar and word choice.

Yay! An update! My god I truly am loving this story. You describe the costumes so well, they almost seem real. Keep writing, and update as soon as possible! I can't contain my excitement much longer...

Vaime

If only Raoul weren't there... it'd be the perfect romance. You are so gifted at using the right, lovely words!!! :)

Yay! Updates!
ahah, I know, I'm just saying this now, but I just saw it and became excited! Please update when you can =D

Oh, I don't wanna swap with Raoul when Erik sees him at the ball... hehe. ;) But it's gonna be really great when he does, though. Fantastic chapter - only poor Erik seems so get a little sexually frustrated. *lol*

Wow... I am seriously in love with this story. I've bookmarked it and everything... Read the whole shebang in about four hours. I quite literally could not bring myself to stop! You do, however, need quite a lot of work with your beta-ing. I would be glad to help you if you want, just give me a yell and I'll look over anything (Just the thought of being able to read the story before everyone else sounds like a great idea to me)

Keep writing! I'm dying to read your next chapter! Will they go to the ball? Will they see Raoul?? Ye gods its just too much for me...

Yours sincerely,
Vaime

arg! i hate raoul and xtine. oh well. hmm yay for updates! *dances* i always look for updates! lalalalal *hugs and dances again*

*best oliver imitation*please, id like some more