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God this is good. I'm on chapter 2 and loving it! Honeydew is quite the concept. I like how you have canon, faerie mysticism, and lust mixed all up in here...=3

OMG PETER!! nooo this is awful! oh please, you have to continue! It's too tender and sweet, and bittersweet; I don' tknow if I want the old Pan back or not...and Hook knows deep down that he wants more. Please write more! Please don't kill poor Peter!

Oh my... *wipes tears away* I see that this story was last updated in the summer, so I'm not overly hopeful for more. :( But even if you never update, I just HAD to leave a review because this story is beautiful! I just recently decided that the idea of Hook/Peter slash was a good idea & this story was *exactly* what I was looking for. It hurts my heart in the way that only really good angsty fan fiction can. I'll keep my fingers crossed that perhaps you'll write more. But if not, I can imagine the rest. :)

This is getting very interesting. Will Peter start to age and get better? I hope so. And I hope he shocks the heck out of Hook by starting to grow up. Please update soon!

I've waited and waited for continuation and then I realized I never did review so here I am. What can I say it's gorgeous. I do find Hook's transition to a good guy hard to swallow sometimes but you suspend my disbelief with your words. Crafty little you. Please I do hope you continue this.

This is just an incredible delight to read... I'm waiting with baited breath for more. Terrible thing to do to us, leaving on a cliff-hanger like that. ;)

I like this. This has to be your most calm piece that you've written. Yes, there's a bit of violence, but compared to your other works, this is a cup of a tea AND a walk through the park. My goodess. I like your other vindictive protrayals of Hook, and I see that side of him in here to a certain point, but this caring, gentle side is a nice turnaround. It's Pan's character I don't quite care for. It's more like a love/hate reaction to his appearances in the story. I feel for him and there's a pity that boils inside of me for his condition and his actions, but there's that broken spirit like he's given up everything. I know it's because of Hook that he feels like that since Hook stayed away from days and rejected him in the forest, but I wish he wouldn't give up so much. I'm not certain how Pan reacts to the chain of events, but if this is his true nature, I hope Hook gives him a good slap on the rump and make him see reason. But Hook... Where to even start with his character? Honestly. Give into your emotions, man. What's the worse that could happen? So Pan will know your feelings, but you won't be scorned and Pan won't be so depressed. I hope Hook doesn't mess up again with Pan, or there won't be a positive outcome with Pan's death when he gives up hope again. You know, I hope Hook feels guilty for what he's done. Anyway, this is a good fiction. I'm into this one. I hope you continue to work on this. It sure is entertaining, if not fueling to a reader's anger and anticipation. Nice work. I like how indepth you wrote your characters. Hook's mind is a troubling one to get into, huh? So have fun! Hope to see an update soon.

Brilliant. I LOVE this story. I've never read this genre and never even thought of Pan/James (but REOW!) but this is so well done...Just brilliant.. Can't wait for more.

Yes, that's the one I wanted back so badly on aff! Very very good story. Thank you.

This is really, really good. it is one of the best hook/pan fics i've ever read, and i really hope you continue it. and please let there be a happy ending.