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for Bon Appétit

by Lomia

schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very sexy, very sensual. Please continue :)
person Death
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That's not the end is it? I hope not. I want to see what happens next !^_~ Please update soon!
person BRP
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O =Druels, pants=
"Christine felt his force inside of her..." or something similar.
DAMNNNNNN!!!
Erik is a buffet of delights!
person Koda
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh. Great chapters.
person BlueVixen2071
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I LOVE it! ^^ Very sensual/well-written! Please email me when you've updated! Thanks! ^,~
person Gevaisa
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOhh! Continue! Definitely continue!
person MrsBixler-Zavala
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a well-written piece of erotica, unlike most POTO stories on this site. I await more. Only one note, just because I am a stickler for spelling....gorgeous.

There ya go, keep it coming.

Jess
person brp
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow. lots of food, including erik, on the menu. yummys.
person Anon
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yum! This is so delicious -- please continue. Soon!
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I really like your story. It´s so sensual.
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