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November 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved it, and wish I knew if she had a sweet ending with either Kappu or Chester (preferably Chester, but I'm biased towards human versions of the Cheshire Cat). I am happy she found her replacement, and that she didn't have to wait for over two decades for the next Story Keeper. As it is now 2016, I know this most likely will not happen, but maybe a sequel depicting how life is for Alice after she's been replaced as Story Keeper? Or Liam's adventures as the new Story Keeper?
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September 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting take on the story. You seem to have taken inspiration from Terry Pratchett's 'Discworld' series, with the whole "The ruler is one with the land and the land is one with the ruler" thing, simply put the land reflects the current ruler. As long as the ruler cares for the land, it will flourish, if with certain 'personality' changes. Regardless I look forward to the rest of this series. Well done.
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July 11, 2012 at 12:00 AM
You should sign as englishwizardyou are male or not?
You know, you write as precocious little girl, and see why signatures like this.
If you really were a male, would your fic with more determination not so bland.
You know, you write as precocious little girl, and see why signatures like this.
If you really were a male, would your fic with more determination not so bland.
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February 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was absolutely fantastic. I loved the story, especially its writing and progression. You're very talented.
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March 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Outstanding story! It was all so exciting, arousing, and adventerous. I loved the ending.
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February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is wonderful! Chapter two reveals a very logical plot as far as wonderland goes. You write very well!
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well done! I once read this a long time ago but it wasn't finished at the time and I was upset by this. I hate getting into a great story and not being able to finish it. Now I have though and I've gotta say, excellent job!
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ho-le, wow. Incredible. I can't even go into why. imagery, emotion, flow, characterization...amazing. You, my dear, have a gift. don't waste it. You're going to be great some day.
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February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap... that was a beautifully awesome story! The sex was hot as hell, the drama was intense, and the world was believable! You wrote a truly amazing epic. I enjoyed the epilogue, with Alice finding her successor. Have you ever considered writing a collection of short stories involving small adventures from Kata's, Morgana's, and Alexia's points of view? Epically cool, that would be. Bravo
--Raven
--Raven
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November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love your story... My only criticism is that you mention all the women's breast sizes too often. I mean we can pretty much gather that every female in wonderland has generously sized breasts by chapter six.
Other than that, your creativity is simply magnificent. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! <3!
Other than that, your creativity is simply magnificent. Thank you so much for sharing this with us! <3!