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for Alice in new wonderland

by englishwitch2003

person AJAngleique
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!

MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
person cyn
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow, for my first Alice fic this is amazing and just wow! I will have to remember to come back and check on your progress.
person digital blasphemy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
holy shit!!! o.O
person digital blaspemy
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
just an afterthought, but i seem to remember the general term for the spider-woman is a "drider" dunno who came up with that idea
person Lina
schedule December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Me thinks Alice is sooo majorly screwed. Woman... er, in this case, arachnid scorned and all that.
person Jackaniny
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the story so far. Definitely worth reading.
Can't wait for the next chapter(which will be soon I hope?).
person arliquin
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story, it was prety good. Oooooooo, and Adonis is sooo CUTE! ^_^ froths because, of soiled mind.
person arliquin
schedule October 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, soo sorry...wrong story. ^_^; Anyway...your story is a little vulger...are you a chic, or a dude? The hourse thing was creepy...but I give you credit for haveing a spider chic...that was kinda cool.Oh, and what's with the green indians? (native what evers) I don't like the fact that alice is a sex crazed, blond, big boobed fool...it's just not creative...sadly. Past all that, the plot is like creative smut...but at least you through some kind of plot in it. -_-
person AJ Angelique
schedule October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woah!
frying pan yo fire i supose
interesting chapter though...

WRITE MORE!!!!
person Lily
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow awesome story keep it up!!
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