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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW! You're doing a beautiful job on this story!
WRITE MORE!!!!!
WRITE MORE!!!!!
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was.... decent. I apologise, but you will discover I am a harsh critic.
There was a lack of detail that made things hard to keep up with. The detail did indeed shift, and it was easy to distinguish the parts that you felt were your favorites, and thus deserving of more text, versus the parts that you cared less about.
All in all, however, it was well written. This much is true, for I usually won't read anything that isn't well written.
There was a lack of detail that made things hard to keep up with. The detail did indeed shift, and it was easy to distinguish the parts that you felt were your favorites, and thus deserving of more text, versus the parts that you cared less about.
All in all, however, it was well written. This much is true, for I usually won't read anything that isn't well written.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT... WAS... AMAZING!!!!!
Please, Please, Please Write more! I beg of you! The horse thing was especially hot ;)
-Grace
Please, Please, Please Write more! I beg of you! The horse thing was especially hot ;)
-Grace
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I [b]LOVED[/b] it!
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August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with you englishwitch, if people don't like something they shouldn't read it. *sighs*
Still, bonus points for sex with the new character. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Will we get to see any other of the old wonderland characters? Chesire Cat perhaps?
Please please please please!
Still, bonus points for sex with the new character. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Will we get to see any other of the old wonderland characters? Chesire Cat perhaps?
Please please please please!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
V. good!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is quite a twist...and I'm loving it. By the way must I mention that I don't like Alice and would like something nasty to happen to her...
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August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA! Cute note at the end.
though, I worry for Alice and what's to come...also, that comment she made had me rolling in laughter "We're Doomed" reminds me of Giles from BTVS (HEHEHEHE)
Can't wait to see what happens next, maybe you should submerge yourself in nothing but Wonderland for awhile for some spark of inspriation, I'd hate for this to become another great story that find no end because some one abanndoned it *sighs*
though, I worry for Alice and what's to come...also, that comment she made had me rolling in laughter "We're Doomed" reminds me of Giles from BTVS (HEHEHEHE)
Can't wait to see what happens next, maybe you should submerge yourself in nothing but Wonderland for awhile for some spark of inspriation, I'd hate for this to become another great story that find no end because some one abanndoned it *sighs*
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YA! You have returned!
Defintally a surprising 2nd chptr and a very intersting plot, I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Defintally a surprising 2nd chptr and a very intersting plot, I am looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Am i am vry pleased with both how this story and 2nd chapter have turned out.
I am hooked on this story and quite glad for it, I egarly await the next chapter in the near future...
AS YOUR PRINCESSS I COMMAND YOU TO CONITNUE THIS STORY!!!!
I am hooked on this story and quite glad for it, I egarly await the next chapter in the near future...
AS YOUR PRINCESSS I COMMAND YOU TO CONITNUE THIS STORY!!!!