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I like how she reacted to his deformity. It wasn't unrealistic. I'd like to see how the story will progress and develop.

Please update... I so want an update... PLEASE!!!

oh wow i kinda really like this fanfic! its so weird, hehe. erik, living forever, eh? but why? you will tell us, yes?

and who is this emilie chic that she wants him so much and knows so much about him and such? AND why did her mother burn her o.O;

please update soooooon!
i like it >D grrr

Ok, I just read chap 6 and I have a feeling that there is a chapter missing in between. Like how did she get to be with Erik when in chap 5 she was just running from him. There is a big gap. Can you please fix this? It makes the story a bit confusing. Also. One of the lines in Chap 6 seems that the font is WAY to big. Its during the singing scene. Please try and take care of these things. Other then that the story is really good. Just watch the few glitches that are in the html scripting. When you want BIG font becareful on the size.

Wonderful fic so far!!! I love the lyrics you've made, very well done. I've just been playing in my mind what types of harmonies would go well with them. I know I'm somewhat of a dork but I love music. Anyways update soon!!!

~Mollie

So far, so good... =)