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by PhantomsJewel

person julie
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've just read my dreams...
person Koda
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, but a little too much laughing on Erik's part. Well, maybe not. He is a little crazy. Uhm, a little more detail? It kind of sped by.
person Carpathianritual
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Exploring our rape fantasies are we? Very out of character for Erik, not matter whose version of Phantom you subscribe to. You write well, but it would have been nice if you had picked a different venue.
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