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Great story, continue ASAP please!

I like your spoiled Veruca but I think perhaps she should be more sadistic, more unaware of the true nature of her feelings, I think she would be too proud to admit to it and getting her sexual kicks out of purely sadistic revenge fantasies instead. Your Wonka is in character in the whimsy small talk and perhaps in the weird correcting mission, but hardly as a sexual aggressor. I think I would have prefered that Veruca stayed the aggressor, that way Wonka wouldn't have to admit even to himself that he wanted it and he could stay more in character. I did it that way in my story "Returns and despiar", which also features the famous rubber gloves.

I think I just vomited lolipops...for starters, can we not have with all the hidden Marry Janes. I mean, come on "I belong to you" Coming from Wonka's mouth!?
Maybe your living out your perfect little fantasy here but this is just absurd...

If you dont finish this story,I swear to hurt you. I LOVE IT!!!!

I love this. Please update. Oh and what was that candy he gave her?

If you don't update soon I might have to seek you out and rip the update from you...this is excellent!! more more more

Wow. I didn't read this for a long time because I thought I would hate the pairing.. but it is just awesome!!!! Please write more!

O_O Whoa mate, you have to update this ASAP it's getting too good

AWESOME UPDATE SOON!!!!!!GO VERUCA!!!!!!!!UPDATE ASAP!!!!!

It's awesome, I love it!!! I'm waiting for the next chapter :P hehe