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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
aww this is so cute. so is there going to be a chapter 16 at all?
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May 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story and your name is it like david tennant and billi piper ilove dr who
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October 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Anymore? I love this story!!!! :)
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I took a chance & read your fic, even though Willy Wonka isn't my ship of choice. Being a writer myself, I absolutely loath flames, so I will try to make this as painless as possible. Your plot is quite good, even though it moves a little too quickly for my taste, but...You really, really, REALLY need a beta. You are doing yourself a huge injustice by posting your chapters in the shape that they are in. Like I said, you have a really good plot idea, & if you would just take a little more pride in your work, you may get better feedback. Just mho, of course.
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
nice story...needs a beta though
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December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was a great chapter, plz continue writing. WILLY/CHARLIE 4EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good
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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ finish it, i love your story. i want to know what happenes to to charlie and willys lives and that of their children
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November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good update soon
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I would like Wonka/Charlie slash that much, but I found that you handled their relationship really well in this story. Plus, ya know, I thought the sex was pretty darn hot and well described here. It was quite a turn-on, actually. Good work!