person MoonShine
schedule November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was really impressed with how this story was written and I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Hope you post more soon!!!!!!!!! :)
person child of neverhwere
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your in DESPRATE need of a beta... but other than that i liked it
person Sailor Aurora
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was actually very intersting to read. amusing too.

although I have to wonder, what is with all the twins? Mrs.bucket even had twins, and she had nothing to do with the chocolate?

anyway, inform me if you have any other updates following up this, please. ^^
person Miya Sparrow
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh don't stop there! please don't stop there I need more of this story!!!!!!!!! ahahahaha
person takkycat
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!! I can't wait till the babies are born!!! This is soooo gooooooddd!!!!!!!
person yoblossom
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how about those womens rights group get it through there head, that now, thanks to willy and charlie, that men and women will now truly be equal? can't wait for the next chapter!
person jess
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter update soon please.
person jess
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon your story is very good
person yoblossom
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i hate the bloody press.....
person yoblossom
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
^^ TWINS!!! SQUEE!!!! Love the chapter! can't wait for more!
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