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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very dark and twisted. I'm sick so I can say, I liked this story. Don't condone rape, but nifty story.
Mmm tied up as Wonka's personal new taste quest....
*clears throat* Ahem. Yes... anyway. *gives you a chocolate covered chocolatier*
Mmm tied up as Wonka's personal new taste quest....
*clears throat* Ahem. Yes... anyway. *gives you a chocolate covered chocolatier*
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting use of the cane, I say. Wonka's disrespect for other people is spot on, but I think he ought to be ignorant rather than downright threatening and aggressive, I think that makes him out of character. Tasting Mrs Bucket as he tasted whangdoodle blood in Loompaland seems quite plausible though, as well as putting his candy making above all social relations.
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You're a sick,twisted little individual.
I like that.
I hope you continue this story.It's nice to read about the darker side of Wonka.
I like that.
I hope you continue this story.It's nice to read about the darker side of Wonka.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEeeeeyah!!!! I had to keep myself from moaning out loud when I read the third chapter at the Internet cafe!! Very sensual in the descriptions of what Mr. Wonka is doing (mmmmm...that sexy mouth!). I love the use of his cane as an erotic 'toy' - I've been thinking of that one myself. I just hated to have it end - I wanted more!!
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November 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! I wasn't expecting that! I hope there is more.
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November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! This is amazing! Update!!!!!!!
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November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"It's gettin' hot in herre...I am getting so hot..." I couldn't help but think of that song when I read that second chapter! Eeeeeeha! How I'm looking forward to the next episode! Where Willy Wonka is concerned, I can't help but think of a phrase from back in the day when cigarette commercials were allowed, "Taste me, taste me! C'mon and taste me!" He could "Lick, lick, lick, lick me from my head to my toe" anytime!
Puhleeeeze!!!! Write the next chapter soon!!!!!
Puhleeeeze!!!! Write the next chapter soon!!!!!
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October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update you bitch get a move on
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update this fanfic soon cos it truly has the making of one of the greats
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September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh! O_o!! heehe! You HAVE to update this thing soon...promise?