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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This one has potential for getting really hot! I love your attention to detail: Mrs. Bucket's observations on Willy Wonka's smile and way of speaking, for example. I hope Mrs. Bucket gets to enjoy whatever happens next - I certainly would enjoy being with Willy Wonka in a few possible scenarios that could result from a start such as this! (He can take me to his candy shop, and let me lick the lollipop anytime...)
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update asap! I'm very curious.
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this story was so great. i totally loved it. the best thing about your story is that you were able to keep DeppWonka in character which was brill. I do hope you intend to continue to keep writing this story I would so love to see Wonka and Mrs. Bucket get it on the only thing is please don't have Wonka rape her please I couldn't bare for Wonka's character to be tarnished. So looking forward to reading more.
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I like it so far...another update would be supurb!