rate_review Reviews

Hello there. I just wanted to say I thought your story was very erotic. Perhaps it is a little too blatant for some people who have trouble seeing Erik as a man with sexual needs, but that's no reason to be so nasty about it. I am sorry to see that you have received so many negative comments, especially as they don't offer much in the way of advice. In my opinion, the only thing you need to adjust is the spelling errors (which is easy enough to fix). I hope that my comments help to convince you that people do enjoy your story and would like to see more. Please be strong and follow your heart. xxx, Jadzia.

Good evening Music Of The Night,
This story was both...FUCKING EROTIC...and...BITCHIN HILARIOUS!
Keep it up, please do.

Well I personally think you did an excellent job with this story. As for the spelling and grammar errors ... we all make them (including some of the ones here who pointed out your spelling and grammar errors) ... don't worry about it. Besides, we all know spell check doesn't pick up every misspelled word.

Anways, great job!! I loved it!

O_O
Okay...
I just read the comments of other readers.
For those of you whom disliked this tale, you are entitled to your opinion, but don't be sharp as knives about it. Save your shark criticisms to people whom keep on being mean to you. Also, one reader was right: Every writer makes mistakes. Heck, I still do. But I know I have talent. Nothing as great as all of yours, mind you, but still.
For the author(ess), if this story wasn't wholly your idea, please give credit to where it is due. But that was nice of you to have thanked whomever assisted/inspired you.
For the reader who said Eric has sexual needs...Hell yeah! And for the other reader who said Eric is sexy when he dominates Christine...Ohhhh yeahhhh...
Eric...=Druels and faints=

Its me, da horny bitch again.
PS everyone, the idea (of Eric fucking Christine up in Box 5) actually, possibly, originally started in an issue of Playboy (or Girl) years ago.
It was a JUICY story. Christine had attended the opera with Raoul. He took off to get a drink or take a whiz, I don't care. Christine felt alone and scared to be alone in her box, so she got up to look for him. She got lost. She entered what looked like her box. Eric sneaks up behind her, tells her shh, bends her over, hikes up her gown, unzips his pants, and...
after he helped her do her taxes, AHEM, he kissed her forehead, said thank you, ma chere, then vanished. Christine finally found Raoul in their box. Oddly, the pervert had a smile on his face. Probably a wet spot on his pants too. Eh.
PPS, geez, Eric and Christine in Music's story are EXHIBITIONISTS!

Your story was really arousing. I loved how Erik totally dominated Christine and made her his love bitch. You are my hero, I am adding you to my list of my very favorite stories. Have you thought of self publishing? I would buy anything you wrote, you must be very sexually experienced to write such a hot fic. I pleasured myself while reading it

PP

Oh.My.God. This is just...horrible. How in the hell did such a crappy fic slip through the cracks on this site and get posted? I think I should write the moderators and have them increase that guidelines for posting. Like make a requirement be the story actually BE GOOD! First off, Erik is not like that in any way. Since when did he become as flat as a paper doll? Christine, Jesus, do not get me started at the wet ragdoll you made her. My farts have more personality. And say it with me here: Spell Check. For the fucking love of all that is Phantom, stop writing. First we have a WONTON goddess Chinese Christine soup and now this drivel. You know, if Erik were real, he'd be weeping right now if he saw this poor characterization of him. Oh wait, I may have heard a gentle sob in the distance. Someone should console him by writing something sensational. Just not you. Maybe my cat, who I coincidentally lined his litterbox with a printout of this and it was so bad even he wouldn't crap on it.

You've recently told a few people that you believed this to be your best fanfiction thusfar. Something NEW, fresh! First of all, stealing other people's idea's(and then thanking them for "inspiration")is WRONG, and REALLY, REALLY insulting to the original authors, who actually have TALENT.Second of all... Um...Hon...You haven't had any to date that were any good to compare it with! And this one just takes the cake. Leroux is rolling in his grave, Andrew Lloyd Webber and all those involved with the original musical and movie are contemplating lawsuits, Erik is getting his lasso ready because you STILL can't get his character right...He's not Fabio, dahling...he's ERIK, the Phantom of the OPERA, NOT OPEAR! And Christine just had 13 nervous and mental breakdowns over how you've basically made her into a whore.

Now I KNOW this is going to be deleted, because you just can't stand that there are people out there who REALLY dislike your writting, and poor baby, you just really can't take bad reviews to save your life. Getting bad reviews is a part of being an author. If you can't take the heat, then do us all a favor and stop typing this trash. Just..stop.

You're story rox chick!!! Yesssssss Raoul made Christine a slut..... and then Erik is toking the night away......sweeeeeeet. It's 4:20 in Box 5 awesome chick.....

Slutz and drug use all in the same fic

you are my new hero......please make Erik toke some more....high erik is cool....

See everyone just doesn't get your story. With drugs Erik can do whatever he wants....he can get real small...

Ok here's the honest truth...too many simple spelling errors (spell check), grammar ...please pick a verb tense and use it, and Erik is far more complicated that this 8th grade version of him. He has flaws and character traits that are simply nonexistant in this portrayal. Yes there is such a thing as PWP but even it should retain some essence of the characters...this does not. Sorry if you don't like my opinion...you are free to delete it.