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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, this is certainly heating up now. I hope somehow she gets through to him. Thanks for updating. Great story.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
BLOODY HELLL!!!
Drat that Erik! Drat, drat, and triple drat!
First, he turns me on when he grabs Christine's hand and rubs it on his pants.
Then, he makes me cry!!!
Oh, the men we love!
And brava for Christine! She stood up for herself, although she is partially at fault.
The other night, I read an internet article in which a feminist explained that she was disgusted with Christine's submitting to the Phantom. She applauded her when she went away with the sweet, stable Raoul. The author said we women ignore good men and go after the psycho abusers.
O_o Okay...umm...
I partially agreed that some women do that...and suffer greatly for it.
But to compare the Phantom to those vile low-lifes? Sheesh.
Yes, he did have issues. Yes, he did have a temper. Yes, he killed. But he killed in self-defense. Okay, he went too far when he tried to kill Raoul.
Why didnt he just give me Raoul, and he had kept Christine? Sheesh. :P But he didn't kill Raoul. He also learned from his other mistakes.
Anyways.
Bad Phantom. He deserves another spanking.
You are an amazing writer. Thanks to you...the next time I read Christmas Carol, I'm gonna look for a naughty Phantom. Hehe.
Please, do continue.
And...ahem...don't forget...they have a duty to make a baby. If they fail the first time, thats kewl. They can do it again and again.
God...I love it when Erik swirls his cape.
Drat that Erik! Drat, drat, and triple drat!
First, he turns me on when he grabs Christine's hand and rubs it on his pants.
Then, he makes me cry!!!
Oh, the men we love!
And brava for Christine! She stood up for herself, although she is partially at fault.
The other night, I read an internet article in which a feminist explained that she was disgusted with Christine's submitting to the Phantom. She applauded her when she went away with the sweet, stable Raoul. The author said we women ignore good men and go after the psycho abusers.
O_o Okay...umm...
I partially agreed that some women do that...and suffer greatly for it.
But to compare the Phantom to those vile low-lifes? Sheesh.
Yes, he did have issues. Yes, he did have a temper. Yes, he killed. But he killed in self-defense. Okay, he went too far when he tried to kill Raoul.
Why didnt he just give me Raoul, and he had kept Christine? Sheesh. :P But he didn't kill Raoul. He also learned from his other mistakes.
Anyways.
Bad Phantom. He deserves another spanking.
You are an amazing writer. Thanks to you...the next time I read Christmas Carol, I'm gonna look for a naughty Phantom. Hehe.
Please, do continue.
And...ahem...don't forget...they have a duty to make a baby. If they fail the first time, thats kewl. They can do it again and again.
God...I love it when Erik swirls his cape.
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well...not like you don't already know this..but excellent job. I feel like I've LIVED this bloody story! LOL! I eagerly await the conclusion, but will be sad for it to end. It's brilliant!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its me...a hot, horny babe reviewing again. Hehe.
Here's a tip for a future chapter.
MAKE-UP SEX IS THE BEST.
Just...picture...it...
=Druels, faints=
Here's a tip for a future chapter.
MAKE-UP SEX IS THE BEST.
Just...picture...it...
=Druels, faints=
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*cries* No, no, no, no.....stopped.....she stopped them.....
*curls up with Erik in the swan bed for comforting*
Okay, busy comforting....will check back later.
Mmmph! *pushes Erik back for a moment* Call me when you've got the next bit up, won't you dear? *smirk*
Great chapter but will have Phantom spank bad author for nasty cliffhangers, precious...yessssss. LOL
*goes back to Erik's lips and forgets stories for awhile* Brava! PMEL Talia
*curls up with Erik in the swan bed for comforting*
Okay, busy comforting....will check back later.
Mmmph! *pushes Erik back for a moment* Call me when you've got the next bit up, won't you dear? *smirk*
Great chapter but will have Phantom spank bad author for nasty cliffhangers, precious...yessssss. LOL
*goes back to Erik's lips and forgets stories for awhile* Brava! PMEL Talia
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is the first story I've read of yours and I must say I'm quite impressed! I love your twist on an old classic! The reader can feel Christine's torment as she questions her eyes and mind as she travels with each of the three spirits! I love your writing style and with the hint of humor! That Raoul is a scumbag!!! He could have at least given Christine some traveling money or use of his carriage! That [insert expletive here]!!! Erik and Christine are face to face now... I can't wait to know what will happen next! Keep it up, I'm hooked! (^_~)
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O
Wow...bloody amazing.
Such a cute, sad little child...then not so cute when she grins like a skull. O_o
Ah, but the last part.
"Erik found me. His leather glove covered my mouth. He yelled in my ear, What are you doing here?"
Ooooo...she should sing to him, "Lets get it on."
Please, more chappys.
Wow...bloody amazing.
Such a cute, sad little child...then not so cute when she grins like a skull. O_o
Ah, but the last part.
"Erik found me. His leather glove covered my mouth. He yelled in my ear, What are you doing here?"
Ooooo...she should sing to him, "Lets get it on."
Please, more chappys.
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GAH! Cliffhanger! No rose for you! LOL Great chapter as always ;) Your obedient servant, PMEL Talia
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December 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful!!! Keep it going now; don't make us wait. <3 I want them to get together for real.
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhh! This is so fantastic. Great reading. Please continue. You've left us readers in the state of panic with this cliffhanger. Thank you for sharing this with us.