rate_review Reviews

This story has me really curious and what you've done seems to be well written. Please can you let me know when you update it. I'd really like to follow it and give a better revciew once i've read more. thanks

saint2sinners@yahoo.co.uk
Saint

Please write more, I REALLY wish to know what happens, it hasn't even gotten to the love yet. Willy was awsome and mysterious although I could not quite catch which Willy Wonka you were trying to write about. In all this story is amazing so far and as I said, PLEASE CONTINUE! I have been waiting for a long time to find out what happens. Please never stop writing you are an exquised writer, thank you for a delightful read. ;)


Americ's Pet

Update! I usualy don't like AU-ish storys, but this one sounds like it's gonna be exstreamly nice... If your mind is hentai enough at least :P

Cool! Interesting how you made Charlie and Wonka meet that way. But could you please write more!!??
Thank you! ;)

Please oh PLEASE for the love of Wonka, update soon!!! ;-; I finally decided to read this, and now I'm so freaking hooked it's scary!! And after only one chapter!! So please update soon!! Ok?? Man, I wish this place had update notifications.. I'll be checking this everyday now!! But I don't mind!!

I look forward to the next chapter! this is amazing!

Ooo! I like the premise. :) There are so few AU fics for this fandom, and yours in going in a nice direction. I like how you established Charlie's character just begining with the cold and hunger, something that he would be very familiar with, but also his maturity caused by learning to grow up in such conditions. Childlike, but not childish, if that makes any sense. Mr. Wonka seems very compassionate and friendly, and I wonder just how their relationship will go from friends to more if he remains that way, since he seems too innocent to ever bring up something sexual. Then again, I'm not the author here. :) I'm sure you have some master plan (or at least an idea or two)! I can't wait for an update. :D

If joo don't update I may be inclined to eat your face!
*Chew Chew*
I want Wonka/Charlie action please TT_TT

~Ryoko