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for Fall from Grace

by semisweetandnuts

person alicia
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well well well...interesting pairing to say to say the least...good job!
person SisterErotica
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was frikkin cool and twisted LOL Love it though!
person anasazi
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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Other than that ~ very interesting!
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've been thinking about writing a Mrs. Beauregarde/Wonka story myself, but I wasn't sure how to, uh, pull it off. I think this story really captures what each of them may be thinking of the other in such a situation. I would sure love to have been in her pretty running suit (or out of it) in that kind of scenario but, of course, not with Mr. Wonka being repulsed and having to shut his eyes to get into it!! That was da bomb! I love it! (Willy Wonka's Garden of Eatin' sure has a lot of possibilities for pleasures of the non-confectionary variety, doesn't it? I should know from having set my first story there...)
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