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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very..."weird" pairing. But the story seems to be very well written and interesting so I'll be waiting for the next chapter. :3
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December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice one. I would have interpreted their interaction a little differently, having seen the movie over and over and studied every exchange of looks and every line, but the essence of it is quite right. In fact, I'm writing a thesis on the movie and I'm focusing on the Wonka-Salt interaction. I might write another fanfic about them too though...
Great use of the business card, making it an advance... I hadn't thought of it that way, actually, I guess I should... Wonka and Salt have quite a lot in common actually, being megalomanic businessmen. Salt's workers look suspiciously cloned too, being all women and dressed the same and sitting in straight lines...
Great use of the business card, making it an advance... I hadn't thought of it that way, actually, I guess I should... Wonka and Salt have quite a lot in common actually, being megalomanic businessmen. Salt's workers look suspiciously cloned too, being all women and dressed the same and sitting in straight lines...
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Most promising. And what an unusual pairing. I hope this`ll be continued. And why not to archive your CatCF fics somewhere else as well as Aff.Net?(not singing praise for Pit`O`Voles here, but there are CatCF archives, you know). They`re most certainly better than the average "me brain go boom" quality, and do seem to have some point in them.
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November 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:D This is very interesting! I'm beginning to be hooked on Mr. Salt/Wonka pairings-they're just so weird! And incredibly interesting!!! I'm thrilled to see another one-and it's very, very good. Please, please continue this!!