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I really liked this, very well done

*giggle* you are a sick, sick, twisted individual and I absolutely ADORED this fic. *hugs*

i love your story. i didn't think i would at first, cause i had followed the link from Deviantart that was on a picture that someone drew for your story. but the more i read it, the more i loved it. its so awesome. you should write more of this pairing. i don't mean exactly like this, but i'm sure you know what i mean.

keep up the awesome writing.

Drea.

I've read all of your stories now, listening to Michael Jackson the whole time. My stomach is rumbling awfully and I really want some chocolate. Write more!

All i can say is WOW. Your writing is so amazingly wonderful and witty, it's unbelievable. On a scale from one to ten, most stories on this site are six or lower. Yours is a twelve!!

What the Hell is wrong with you? Why would you write such sick things?



Although I must admit, it was hot.

X_x Words cannot express how Willy-fucking-Wonka-amazing this story is! I am truly blown away by it. I do feel kinda sorry for poor Sebastian though XDDD Poor rent boy. Doomed to be a rent boy for his life probably. Although I did have a thought of Charlie and Sebastian(who, of course, would be the wearing that darling "look-a-like Veruca frock"), in the midst of screwing like Oompa-loompas on the full moon, Wonka walks in on the two... GARH! Too much well written smut! I bow before your ability at well written smut! *bows*

A totally surreal fic.Worthy of the same praise,more really then the movie.You acted ,directed,costumed,choriogrphed.W...OW.You got Wonka exactly.This whole thing is uncanny.One could tell he would bend gracefully in this direction.I am speachless really.Parts I liked,the actions the television room took,Wonka's speach in said room,the kid,'bastion playing games in a Veruka dress ..volentarily,the non violence,the Mike TV shorts,the taste of Willy's(gotta laugh,willy) cum,the factory being an extention of Wonka's emotions.How he explained the keepers demise..the kid,he has spunk(groan, that came out all wrong.arghgroan again),the kid hiding in the chair, the angel/devel imagry, the end with small Charlie.The dialogue and plot was first rate.I am just hornswaggled.....

ABSOLUTE DELIGHT!!!

i love it!

Most likely the best Catcf fic I've ever read, even if I'm a not a fan of this pairing.

I love your description of Willy's and Charlie's personalities, the terrible sexual tension between them...I love also the way you managed to put an OC in the story and make it seem believable, unlike most OCs that tend to be stereotyped and somewhat cheesy.

Good work, really.