rate_review Reviews

This story is so amazing! You've left us all at such a cliff hanger --- PLEASE UPDATE :) Take pity on your fans.

At first I thought I was bad for liking this cause of the obvious pedopheliac connotations. Then I got to wondering, Exactly HOW OLD is Charlie at this time? Since you're the writer could you please tell me? I know he's under 18 but just how far under 18? And yes, I understand that you're explaining his and Wonka's relationship with the greco-roman relations that grown men had with young boys. But still....oh god. I know I sound like a liberal idget but I still gotta ask so I feel less dirty. 15-16 I have no problem with, but any younger then that and my instincts kick in and I feel all protective...even towards a fictional character.(I have issues about these things that are personal and I dislike discussing in public...and how more public can you get then the internet.)

Very wonderful story. Love the kink and the candy
and I'm glad I just discovered both the site and the
story and could read it all in one bite. xoxo

Hello, hello! Read up to chapter 16 & WOW! Reading the intimacies between Willy & Charlie is like reading my very first lemon all over again, which I quite enjoy. Not many authors can pull that off for me & I love coming across/discovering fanfics that do. Off to read the rest of your wonderful story!^^

I've only read 6 chapters of your story (I'd read more but I gotta hit the hay) & I gotta say I'm loving it so far. Like my sis, who reccomended your fic, I love the little details you've added to help explain why Willy is the way he is. Quite possibly my two favorite scenes so far is Willy & Charlie's pancake breakfast, & the special Alice in Wonderland treat Willy makes for Charlie.^^

This story is wonderful; it retains the fanciful feeling of the Willy Wonka series while incorporating and exploiting a dark side that was never fully expressed in the books and movies. Brilliant writing and storyline. Keep up the great work!

~ Kari

DUDE I just finished your story in one go. All I have to say that it is good. But when are you going to update again. Not that I want to push you or anything. But that was on doozy of a cliff hanger. So hope your creative juices are flowing and hope to read more.

love the story! Update would be appreciated greatly.

*too lazy to log in to AFF account*

You are just bloody freaking amazing do you know that? Absolutely brilliant. ._. it's 3:35am so excuse my lack of critique. I just watched the movie again and decided to see if you update dwhich you had. So of course I stayed up and read it. I'm glad I did. Each chapter gets better and better. It's like crack ._.

<-< keep writing, I send you lots of fangirlish love >->;; <3

I love the story so far your doing a great job. You pay perfect attention to detail and such. I love that about this story. Its all so well thought out and perfectly detailed. Also i like that if you didnt create somthing yourself you give credit to whom did at the bottom of the paige. Its a wonderful story please keep it up.
Ps. I love that you have the reoccuring character. M is a good character. He adds a bit of harshness to the story. To show that there are things that are bad and if you think Wonka is well then you just dont know. It allows people to see that hes not the bad guy M is and M is what people should fear.