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Oh please update soon! This is a grand story! Willy must get Charlie back, and soon.
I don't suppose he'll ever be allowed outside the factory anymore after this, huh? /:|
I hope Willy doesn't have to give his secrets away either! Oh the suspense!

I just finished reading up to your latest chapter and I'm completely hooked, your writing is so interesting. can't wait untill the next chapter
-Mino

it says theres an error and stuff i just want to know if you can find it somewhere else, still love the story poor Charlie.T_T but the story geting good i really like it.^_^

0__0 Not twenty-four hours after I review, another chapter shows up and keeps me from much needed sleep! I love what you've done to Mr. Bucket. He actually reminds me of the cop from "Armitage III" when he gets 'changed' by the mad doctor! Is it me or is there a slight Harry Potter refrence in there? The note bursting into flames then into a hat with a skull?(Or maybe I'm just reaching?).

WONDERFUL CHAPTER! Hehe, if Willy isn't careful, it sounds like he could end up with his own militia XD

Willy's dream faze was exquised. Although I must say, HE CAN NOT GIVE THAT UP!!!! Please write more very VERY soon! I like what you did for Grampa George and how you put in what happened between Wonka and Fickle Gruber . . . even if it seems a little bit creepy. Write now PLEASE!!!!!!! Still as fantastic as usual, keep it up! ;)

*sighs and bows head, extending arm* Okay, it's offical. I'm [i]hooked[/i] on these two! And it's uttery your fault! *grins* This series goes just [i]beyond[/i] the T.B. remake and into a whole new dimension! The story you have here should be a fandom all unto itself! It's simply amazing and just [i]too[/i] tempting! I love the growth you've given to Charlie and Mr.Wonka, indeed I LOVE what you've down with the entire family! Yeah I'm using a lot of these "!" things but I can't help myself! As for the Pegan ways, you're right up there girl! As for the Irish meals; LONG LIVE THE POTATO!!! (My mom's side of the family is Irish so I know of the many different ways to 'mold' a potato into a meal ^^).

I [i]LOVE[/i] this series! Keep it going! ^___~V

Hmm, this is a good "anticipation" chapter. It was really cool to see what happened with Mr. Bucket but I'm still oh-so-curious as to what's going to happen to poor little Charlie. It was really funny to see M appearing again and hopefully he'll come to the same sticky end too. Heh heh. That's what he gets for messing with Wonka. It was quite a surprise though, to see Prodnose mooning over Mr. Wonka's kiss. A noteworthy kiss to be sure, but that Wonka would ever let the other man touch him?.. hm. By the by, I really like how you always leave links and comments at the end of each chapter. It adds to the whole story that way, so thank you. :) Hope to read more soon! Toodles.

Yya! You got the new chapter up! xxxxxxxxx Every time I read this it brings a smile to my face at how well you have kept Willie in character. I love the little sayings he has, you have him saying phrases that I havn't heard in yesrs, it's brilliant. xxx Is Willie going to give the other candymakers their just desearts? I hope he does. Keep up the brilliant work! xxxxxx

Yay! I love George! He's great^^ Can't wait to see Wonka's revenge. . .huh sounds like a movie title lol

Eeek. <3 -excitement-

I haven't seen the updates mentioned on LJ communities lately (am I not looking hard enough? XD), so I said to myself, "Check AFF."
So I did. And you have updated. And I know that reading the next chapter will be a half-hour to an hour of my life that I won't regret. <3

-skitters off to read-